Reviews for MirokuSango Story
SHOOTING STARS chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
PLEASE READ chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Bare is a word, but it's wrong grammar. In this case, you would use "bear". Thanks, and please do not think I am one of those people who just has to correct things or else it will bug them for the rest of the day. Also, where's the evil Sango? It might have just been another description. Sorry if it wasn't, and if it was, where was the evil Sango?
animefansunleashed chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
good, that's all i can say, good. keep on writing. _
animepinay18 chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
uh ok. that was kool... but where the hek did the evil sango come from?
PinkCamellia chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
aw. very sweet. nice job
moonyme chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
Nice chapter you should have written it in detail...yup its a very original idea...and it kinda rocks too !

well looking forward to your other stories so write more !

bye !
Kiritsune chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
o...shocking plot, it had my eyes wide open! Very original and some really good ideas. You might want to let the story tell itself though, instead of describing every detail. Otherwise it's a pretty good piece.