|Reviews for Harry Potter vs Tom Riddle|
| dfcole chapter 6 . 7/5/2005
Great chapter! Plz update soon!
| TheJazz chapter 6 . 6/28/2005
| TheJazz chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
love it love it love it!
| Dianne chapter 5 . 4/13/2005
HI! I am glad to see a new chapter of this one up! I can definitely see an overall improvement in your writing. It was really good to begin with, but now, it's even better. I am so glad you are sticking with this story, and now that we have a bit of a cliffhanger, I do hope the next chapter will be up soon? I can't wait for details like, what will happen to Harry now that he has been attacked by a werewolfe. Was he bitten? How bad off is he? How will this change Harry and Lupin's relationship? Poor Remus will feel terrible. I usually don't care much for new characters, but Maria is fascinating,so I like her. Are you still reading my story, or did you decide it's not your cup of tea, which is fine too of course. Anyway, your story is well written and I can't wait to read more! Hope you are recovered from your accident.
| dfcole chapter 5 . 4/12/2005
Great chapter! Plz update soon!
| Dianne chapter 4 . 3/31/2005
Glad to see the A/N came from you, meaning you have been feeling better since the accident? Anyway, I'm liking this story! Maybe a bit more background on Maria would be better or something. I don't personally need it, but maybe others would. I think this story is very well written and original and very interesting. Don't go by reviews alone. People read things all the time and don't review, although I personally frown on that, since writers of fanfiction aren't paid and if someone likes a story, it's kind of like a tip when they review in my opinion. I always review, unless I have nothing nice to say at all, then I go by the motto, 'if you haven't anything good to say, say nothing.' This is a worthy story. Do you have a beta? I didn't for the longest time, and that was a problem for some of my more picky readers who wanted perfect grammar. Eveyone's a critic! Don't be discouraged by fewere responses to this one. If you are set to finish this one, which I do hope you are, since I'm certainly interested, do it for yourself and the people who like it, not for other reasons. Enjoy the reviews when they come, but honestly, you'd be surprised by how many people are probably actually reading and not reviewing out of lack of time or just plain laziness. You are a good writer and when I get time, I'll check out your other stories, but I've been swamped with family matters as my husband and I have had two deaths in the family, one on his side, one on mine within the last two weeks. that's why I haven't reviewed anything at all for two weeks, but see, I'm still reading and enjoying this! It's great! Please continue!
| ElspethBates chapter 4 . 3/17/2005
Nice Story! You seem to have everything pretty well fleshed out and some good ideas going. I'm looking forwardto seeing if Harry can come up with something better than Wolfsbane... but I'm thinking he better find a really old book that will tell him what to do with that really rare herb that Dumbledore gave him.
| Callista MacLeod chapter 4 . 3/16/2005
Sorry I haven't reviewed, I've been kinda' AWOL lately.
I think the reason "Young and Halpless" has more reviews is that it's a more unique plot and it evokes more emotions . . . you know, little boy, sad and alone, suffering abuse . . .
It may also simply be that more people have read Young and Helpless by now than this ficcy.
I, however, am very VERY interested in this whole "heir" thingy . . . it's certainly more creative than when they're just heirs to the four founders . . . now there's an actual REASON for heirs to be relavent-does that make any sense? If it doesn't, let me know and I'll try to clarify . . . hm . . .
| slate592003 chapter 4 . 3/16/2005
nice job. keep up the good work.
| Dianne chapter 3 . 3/10/2005
oH, I do hope you are recovering, and it is nice of Celine to do the posting for you, so thanks to both of you for a wonderful story! At first, I thought Harry would go with Ginny,but now it looks as if Maria will be the lucky lady...and that's cool. This story is really heating up for only the third chapter. I love the way Harry is protective of Remus, that is so touching and the plant thing is brilliant. I have completed my story, and I am proud to say that I have come up with a treatment for Remus also, better than wolfebane, but not a cure, which will be revealed nearing the end of my story .
I love stories where Remus is the guardian, they make so much sense, but it allows for Harry to see others while he is away, which keeps all the characters together...I like this, because so many stories leave out main characters like even Ron and Hermione and that doesn't make sense to me. Your story is much more well rounded than most on this site, and don't worry, I have a feeling you will have plenty of reviews soon. You can count on me because I'm hooked already! I will press the recommend button after this chapter and hopefully that will help.
I took a chance and have a new character in my story too, and I was afraid people wouldn't like that, but I see you have done the same and she is a great new character with a lot of depth and interest. It seems Harry's kiss with her went a lot better than Cho's! OOh, that was so swet!
I love where this story is headed and I have neverread one where Harry goes back to Godric's Hollow to live, so that is very original and well thought out. Once again, do get well soon, and hello to you and Celine. Excellent chapter!
| Dianne chapter 2 . 2/5/2005
gREAT STORY!I just have a few questions. Are there any protective wards around Harry or the house itself? I know Harry is self sufficient, but is feeling a little scared or lonely? I love the Riddle character! That will get the readers for sure! I can't wait to find out who she is and what she is all about. Do you plan for the common characters to visit any time soon? Will Lupin become Harry's new guardian? Good stories always leave me wondering things like this, and this is definitely a great story! I haven't read many seventh year stories, so this will be a treat! Please update soon!
| Dianne chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
No, the first chapter is not boring and slow! It's just that other writers forget to include background like you did, and just jump into action no one understands. It's a very well written story and a fine beginning! Also, I can compliment your spelling and grammar! Well done! I liked how Lupin used magic to find out what was on Harry's mind. I've never read a story where Harry goes back to Godric's Hollow either,so this will be interesting for me! What a great idea! I will add your fine story to my favourites and author alerts so I can follow it. I hope Harry starts eating soon, or he'll get sick! WEll DONE!
| Callista MacLeod chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
Heehee . . . surpri-ise!
Interesting start-I'm very curious as to how this whole wicked revenge thingy will pan out!
I just have one question. I see that you said Harry is sixteen, and something about enjoying the summer that had just started . . . so does that mean that this is POST-Sixth Year and September will be the start of Harry's Seventh Year?
Hm . . .
Well, make no mistake that I'll be waiting (in)patiently for the next update! Bravo!
| raelove chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
hey it a good start. I'm looking forward to the next chapter