Reviews for Abandoned Truth
pinksnow chapter 2 . 2/17/2006
it was really beautiful!
Nintendo Queen chapter 2 . 10/2/2005
AH. *Falls over* SO MEAN.
anonymous but interested chapter 2 . 7/1/2005
Hi. This story is very sweet and touching. It's very sad. And beautiful.

Thanks for sharing it with us. And though it didn't end happy, it was a lovely, sad story.

Thank you.

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RyvenRoth chapter 2 . 5/15/2005
what? a 2 chapter story ? you can do better than that.
Felicia Birceno chapter 2 . 3/20/2005
i really liked this fan fic it was...not like the others whre Amon ends up with Robin and they are happy forever i liked it alot.,...no no no i loved it
Bishi Hunter chapter 2 . 1/28/2005
AWSOME story Meeko Melodie chann

i love it i love it !

i can't get over this one line you wrote:All my life I've waited...

Once again, Robin felt empty; with all of her feelings poured out to a man who didn't even return that same feeling back.

A hollow soul; a soul with no returning bliss.

it's so so good! _
young wiccan chapter 2 . 1/23/2005
wow! this is really good! and no, it wasn't predictable at all, I seriously thought he liked her back. but this is definitely more realistic than the usual "Amon kissed her passionately" or something. I really think you could make this longer, like maybe have Robin stay there all night, crying, and eventually Amon has to get her and bring her to work? or maybe Robin goes to work and doesn't feel like going on any of the hunts or anything, is withdrawing in on herself, and Amon sees the effects his refusal has on her, and maybe, you could go on from there?

those are just suggestions, but I really hope you write more for this story

sorry for this overly large review
BlueKitten chapter 2 . 1/17/2005
You're good. But Why that short?
Zurizip chapter 2 . 1/16/2005
I dunno, I kind of expected the pre requisite happy ending for the both of them...

perhaps a titch OC, but it was understandable.

Still, the fact that Amon walked away made it a bit different, and that you actually ended it there.

so go you.
Guardian-of-the-night chapter 2 . 1/16/2005
Hey, this is a really moving and emotional story, I'm actually glad it didn't end in one of the conventional ways where they get together. You've captured the style of the series, and incredible details...good one!
Shouni chapter 2 . 1/16/2005
Wow, that's what you call a sad ending. Amon leaving her there for the only reason, you're a witch, as an excuse. *snif* Aw well. REALLY good anyway .
Ayjah chapter 2 . 1/16/2005
the sentance where you talk about her not not needing to force her self to look in his eyes was a litle confusing (not sure if a word was wrong)... he was licking her face? different ! How sad an ending though!cruel :) I will definately read the next piece you write :)
Twisted Deception chapter 2 . 1/16/2005
Kool chapter. I really liked it. I can't wait to see wut else u come up with.
silent t.e.a.r.z chapter 2 . 1/16/2005
so dis is da end? poor robin dat was so sad, amon is so cold.. i hope dey get together soon... if it is da end den pl make another one soon or if it isnt den i hope u update soon
felinefemme chapter 2 . 1/15/2005
What? Dang!

But I like the way you ended it - a nice, hanging, *evil* conclusion. That would be just like Amon to leave her like that, & just like Robin to let him go. Dang. Great story, but dang;D
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