Reviews for Behind Closed Doors
Peeka-chan chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
This is PURE LOVE from me to you. This totally made my day. Poor Cloud... .
Loserfish chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
HAHA, oh wow, that was quite a laugh. :D

Zach and powertools, Seph with the porno-gun girl magazine, and poor Cloud stuck in a locker - oh wow, who would thought those up? I loved how you wrote their interaction. It was amazing.

Oh, and the line where it goes: "Ow," Cloud said, and then, "you're not helping, you're just groping."

Ohmygosh, priceless. :D
Dantes Valadris chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
That. Was. Amazing.
used to be dragonrider17 chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
aw, poor little cloud! XD this was amazing!
M.F.D chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
I like how, of all things in the world, it's tits and firearms that Seph disapproves of. Mad lulz overall!

And now, free to imagine whatever happens after this, I choose the "sweaty threesome" option!
NextNothingNew chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
"Ow," Cloud said, and then, "you're not helping, you're just groping."

I was going to say 'This reminded me so much of thorne_scratch from lj!' And then I looked to see who the author was. Suspicions confirmed, I grinned and decided to fav this. And you. And put up an alert, just in case.

(The little tiny notes, just about the cameo body paint and bad hold on the gun, the mention of Prank Week, made this fun)
VeelaChic chapter 1 . 8/8/2008


Amazing, I was left speechless for laughter for about ten minutes, and yeah maybe that's cause it's about 2.30 am, but I don't think so. Your story was amazing, freaking amazing. Hilarious.
Mandagin chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
Aw, it's okay Cloud. I spent a lot of time in my locker at boot camp too. Like anyone could gain any weight eating that nasty military food! Very cute story, and it fills me with nostalgia lol. :)
Creative Spark chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
Awesome fic!

000040 chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
XD This was great.
Shirosenshi Kisetsu 116 chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
lmfao that was great!
Kitsune Kit chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
That last line was amazing!
Stellar Eclipse chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
Awesome, just awesome. Poor Cloud! The characterizations were brilliant and I loved all of the dialogue, especially Zack's whole "Oh, just you try" bit. Nicely done. XD
Asilem Dlanod chapter 1 . 1/6/2008

That was quite amusing.

RandomTopic chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
It took me a couple of paragraphs to realize what was going on. Then I had to go back and reread the beginning. But this was a funny fic. I love Zack and the interaction with Cloud and Sephiroth.
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