I know it's been a few years since this chapter has been made, but I think that what I'd like to say should still be known:

I -still- remember the waiting area piece since the time I read it two years and a month ago. I was searching frantically for this fan fiction the other day, since I just sort of grooved back into a Beyblade phase, but even when I gained interests in other things I still remembered this scene. As a writer, I thought you might appreciate it if I let that be known, because it's certainly something when you make a memorable piece (fan fiction or not).

I'm sorry if I'm coming across weird or... something XD And in no way am I asking you to continue, but I thought I'd give a compliment where it's due. :D

i wonder how this will continue... update!

Yeah, Carl means farmer too. Poor King Carl of Sweden.

I just love Kai's personality and how you portray it. Though I would of paid a million dollars to witness the sex-depreived women in Paolo's. XD Please update!

Tala(Yuuri) is a good friend for Kai, I'd say. As for Rei's little entrance...Geez Kai! *smack* Notice the hotness that is Rei...honestly...well at least we know that Mao is evil and Kai can't possibly like her personality... but I guess that's for you to know and us to find out. Update soon. ~

Well I'll definitely have to say that you have a unique plot there and perhaps even triangle. I've seen a few and read a couple of Kai-Rei-Mao but I have never seen any Mao-Rei-Kai. One point for originality! Two chapters in and I've already picked who I am rooting for! Go Mao go! (Sorry just not a big yaoi fan! LOL!)

So you want ideas for Tala? Hm... Well I'm guessing you want him to have some sought of ties with Kai so maybe Kai's boss or apprentice, co-worker or perhaps his gym trainer. You know how girls chat to hairdressers about there problems (well I do!) Maybe he chats to him while he works out or something. Anyway its your call! Later!

I LOVE IT!

George is a cool one! XD

Cool chapter, I really cant imagine Kai reading Cosmo, too funny! Rei is in it! Yeah! How could Kai not pay attention? Mao is only his future bride! LOL!

Hope to see the next chapter again soon! Looking forward to it! _

You only 'think' that you've uncovered another Mao hater?

I guess I didn't make myself clear last time...

I ABSOLUTELY HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE!

Mao...

She's the most disgusting thing in the entire universe!

I know Kai'll be with Ray, coz they are meant to be together, and even if you don't put tham together, I know that they should be, and anyway, you can't make such a twist in the plot, it jus isn't right!

Otherwise, this chapter was awesome!

I really liked it...

YAY! RAY CAME IN!

Please update soon...

Yo!

George... *rolls around the floor laughing*. That is so brillant. You were right aboutRei hair. It does reach the middle of his thigh. Yeah! Rei, such a pretty kitty. I love the two cats. Are you sure you want Kai and Mao to have quality time together. Anyway I like what I'm reading and I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Peace Out!

LittleMissYaoi

P.S. It would of been funny to see Paolo but like you I know nothing about beauty, so oh well. Bye bye Paolo.

Heh heh... Geaorge... *GiggleSnort*

Yuri being a friend is a good idea...

Rei! Yay! Actually, in the series, I believe his hair reaches to back of knees/floor. Or somewhere around that length...

Hehe! Kai's name I found out was Mikhail Dmitriv, and Mikhail was one of my favorite characters in Steel Angel Kurumi. _

Anyway.. XD; This is a hilarious fic, and I agree that you really did bring out Voltaire's character. So great, in fact, that he's like a character that I shouldn't like... but I like anyway? XD The book I'm reading now has a father that is like that.

Kai/Mao... XD Dear Bast, some of the het-ness in Beyblade is inconceivable.

-Ropponmatsu (teh third!)

Yo!

O wow. That was so kool! I wonder if it's Rei or Mariah that's at the door? I like the mention you did about Wakka/Yuna fics. I know what you mean. That just does not happen. I liked how you protrayed Voltaire. It very like what I thought he would be like _.

Thank you again for sticking up for me in my story. I thought I would get out if you were writing anything. I'll be updating on Tuesday. I hope you update. I can't wait to see what happens.

Peace Out!

The way you made Voltaire was very acurate to how I imagine him to be. This is a very well-written and detailed fic, not forgetting interesting! Could the girl that Kai is betrothed to be Mariah? The pink gives it away! I think this is the first Kai/Mariah fic I've read! But it is gonna be a Kai/Rei later on right? Hope so!

I cant wait for you to update so I'm putting you on my author alert! This fic is really cool! I'm enjoying it so much already! _

::snickers with filet mignon getting a death glare from Kai:: Can't wait for the next chapter.

Peace, Love, & Anime: Girl

I'm not usually a fan of yaoi or shonen-ai whatsoever, but this is just a good story! Update, please!