|Reviews for Your Funeral|
| lyra chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Dark but well written,
Very interesting to read, good job
| ChilaliSnowbird chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Dark. I loves it.
| Anchorite chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
good exercise, my friend.
looking forward to reading other stories.
| GoldenRat chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
This is a very scary version of what happened after the Labyrinth. Sarah sucking the life/creativity out of Toby, what a horrible concept.
| FromMyBackyard chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
Forgetting this was a one shot, I kept looking for more!
I like your logic.
Toby became her puppet - his visions became hers - she molded him into her image.
It seems only fair, given the fact she was still a fanciful child and he a young impressionable boy. He would believe anything she told him.
I think those "lessons" she learned were all a lie. She never learned a thing.
| Manic-Baka chapter 1 . 1/24/2005
Thank you very much for your review! I love you. I will now commence to stalk you.
| Santrea chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
Hm I like this. Your idea is logical. It does seem possible that by beathing Jareth Sarah could have won Toby. I'll be looking forward to reading more Labyrinth fanfiction from you.
| The Jolly Glomper chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
O.O Wow. Real thought-provoker there. That was wonderful. Absolutely wonderful.
| BayouWraith chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
All I can say is...Wow. Nicely done.
| LadyAniviel chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
You did this beautifully. This is a work of art, a wonderful description. You are a wonderful writer _
| Mab Queen of Faerie chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
What an interesting twist! Toby was Sarah's property because it was she who won Toby during her contest against Jareth.
Brilliant as always, Ripper!
| Dark Gotham chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
Wow, this is really great. For some reasony stiked me something as rather creepy but I like this though.