Reviews for Your Funeral
lyra chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Dark but well written,

Very interesting to read, good job
ChilaliSnowbird chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Dark. I loves it.
Anchorite chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
good exercise, my friend.

looking forward to reading other stories.
GoldenRat chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
This is a very scary version of what happened after the Labyrinth. Sarah sucking the life/creativity out of Toby, what a horrible concept.
FromMyBackyard chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
Forgetting this was a one shot, I kept looking for more!

I like your logic.

Toby became her puppet - his visions became hers - she molded him into her image.

It seems only fair, given the fact she was still a fanciful child and he a young impressionable boy. He would believe anything she told him.

I think those "lessons" she learned were all a lie. She never learned a thing.
Manic-Baka chapter 1 . 1/24/2005
Thank you very much for your review! I love you. I will now commence to stalk you.
Santrea chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
Hm I like this. Your idea is logical. It does seem possible that by beathing Jareth Sarah could have won Toby. I'll be looking forward to reading more Labyrinth fanfiction from you.
The Jolly Glomper chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
O.O Wow. Real thought-provoker there. That was wonderful. Absolutely wonderful.
BayouWraith chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
All I can say is...Wow. Nicely done.
LadyAniviel chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
You did this beautifully. This is a work of art, a wonderful description. You are a wonderful writer _
Mab Queen of Faerie chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
What an interesting twist! Toby was Sarah's property because it was she who won Toby during her contest against Jareth.

Brilliant as always, Ripper!
Dark Gotham chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
Wow, this is really great. For some reasony stiked me something as rather creepy but I like this though.