Reviews for The Art of Deception
kuranoxd chapter 5 . 5/15/2014
Omg i swear this story is pure gold but sadly im 9 years late QAQ (waiiiii/internal screaming)
Please continue n
You have inspired me so much with this story that I wanna cosplay all these scenes out as Gippal xD
sky hi chapter 4 . 5/25/2012
I reviewed this story like 6 years ago. And now I'm back rereading it and can honestly say what a fucking masterpiece this story is. It honestly felt like the first time I was reading it.

Your little detail to every single scene and your characterization of Gippal and Baralai are just absolutely perfect and how I would imagine them. You make every single line sound almost poetic, explicitly detailed, and just a joy to read.

This story is definitely in the top 3 of all the Final Fantasy (not just X-2) and KH fanfiction out there. I'm seriously bummed out that you have not updated in several years and will probably never get to see how this wonderful story ends in my lifetime.

I just want to say thank you for just writing one of the best stories to one of my favorite couples ever.
Androgynous-Heron chapter 5 . 5/19/2012
so... were gonna see devon soon?

let the bitch come so all fans can mentally BITCH slap her

I slap someone else if you make her a decent person, please do't. that would ruin the whole purpose of the plan.
Seta Kaita chapter 5 . 9/3/2009
hm, you're not planing on continuing this fic, are you ._. a pity cause, i really love this fic *sniffs* please continue this one *puppy eyes*
Chishio Aiyoku chapter 5 . 3/22/2009
This story is so funny and very cute : )

I do hope you'll continue it soon!
TolkienkookAD chapter 5 . 5/26/2008
agh update please.

There are some inspiring gippalai fics at the first page, now! Please, god, the freaking tension is TOO MUCH.
TolkienkookAD chapter 2 . 5/25/2008
Okay, I know this was last updated like, 3 years ago, but I'm not even done the chapter, and I HAD to tell you that the monkeys for kindergardians was gold.

Like, that is fantastic writing right there. You had me so fooled.

I'll review again when I'm done the chapter, probably.
Someonewholovetoreadfanfics chapter 5 . 7/19/2007
I love this fic please continue T.T
Toume Ummei chapter 5 . 5/15/2007
I have to say, this is one of the best stories that I have ever read. I absolutely love the way that Gippal and Baralai get on with each other. Bravo. Keep up the good work!
Yorae-chan chapter 5 . 2/23/2007
X3 Squee~ I loove this story! I just started playing FFX-2 a few days ago, and paired Gippal and 'Lai up straight away, haha. _/

Gippal is so funny when he's clumsy, hehe. This story makes me laugh alot :P

So keep up the awesome work, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Sparkly-elf chapter 5 . 2/23/2007
I know you're probably not going to update after so long, but this was absolutely amazing! Like, whoa! Incredibly funny in places, and hot and heavy when needed. I love you style, it goes so suddenly from funny to hot n'heavy it made my heart race. You have such a perfect way of describing human emotion, it's... perfect. Right on the button.
sky hi chapter 5 . 2/12/2007
Hm...this story haven't been updated in what...ONE YEAR and a HALF! It's always the good stories that's never updated. I really like stories like these that have really long chapters and are well detailed and written. Well anyways, update soon!
Micayasha chapter 5 . 2/3/2007
-Blink- -blinkblink- Not that I don't love the story ('cause I do) but - Gippal's eyes are GREEN... All Al Bheds have green eyes and insteads of dots for pupils they have swirls.
Dra'Varr chapter 5 . 8/19/2006
Thou shalt update very soon. Thy story is most compelling, most worthy of His attention.
foxy-comic-death chapter 5 . 7/26/2006
*cries* please don't leave this Gippal obssessed fangirl like this! Update soon! Need the fic!
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