Reviews for Ninja Magic
97vamp chapter 8 . 7/3/2013
Do your best and ill be looking out for the next update. Can't wait!
Lucan chapter 8 . 2/8/2013
The plot is great, but your grammar is absolutely terrible. I had to just guess what you meant at times, it was that bad. Is this how you speak? If your first language isn't English then this all makes sense. If not... then a five year old could form sentences better than you. If English is your main language then this is unacceptable.
Dark Neko 4000 chapter 8 . 9/14/2010
what going to happen next

please please update
The Lost Cub chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
Well, I agree your spelling and grammar are atrocious. I think the idea for the story is decent, but it is hard to understand. Maybe you should find a beta to help you shape it up. You could use more details. I thought I was on a speeding train things were so blurry.
BlackRose-FlowerofDeath chapter 8 . 1/3/2010
Hope you get your stuff back. And this story is great and very interesting...can't wait for the next chappie! So..is Harry slowly remembering his past as Harry or did he know all along?

BlackRose
CappuccinoLover001 chapter 8 . 9/29/2009
Please update soon!
Sand Kitsune chapter 8 . 1/23/2009
I can't wait till you update. I was really looking forward to more chapters.
Kit89 chapter 8 . 12/19/2007
All is forgivin. Just as long as u actually continue at some point or other.

see ya!

FC
animelava chapter 8 . 6/9/2007
plz update soon!
Merrymow chapter 8 . 6/1/2007
I was wondering when you're going to update?
Merrymow chapter 7 . 4/24/2007
I was wondering when you're going to update?
lil' Stoner chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
Why must good stories be ruined by gay pairings. It isn't natural! Guy on guy is just wrong.
Mor Cant chapter 4 . 3/2/2007
Your grammar, spelling, and use of punctuation... sucks ass. I'm really sorry dude, but your English really stinks. There's no denying it. There are lots of instances where you use the wrong words, which cause much face-faulting done on the audience's part.

But you know that already, isn't that right?

However, in any case, I realize that you also have a vast imagination at the same time, and that has made your story so damn alluring so far. You might want to be careful, though. Too much imagination and no logic (with too little pattern for the reader to follow) can lead to overbearingly haphazard and out of character consequences, and people tend to get disinterested when that happens. Just a warning! Plot ahead of time! Doing so prevents writer's block, too!

It'd be a damn shame for this not to get the fame it potentially deserves. Keep in mind that I would not have read this far if I hated your story!

Try not to take this review too seriously. I'm just some jackass with the right of freedom of speech, alright? Alright. I'm off to read more. Salut. Bye.
Moonlight black rose chapter 7 . 2/1/2007
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Chosha Kurenai chapter 7 . 1/17/2007
I'll see if i can help with that writer's block of yours. how about getting the wizarding world involved again and have everyone come looking for him, only to find our favourite Uchiha. depending on what you want, it could be manipulative or just a worried Dumbles. with what they do for Haku, how about Sasuke say stuff about how he once was as Harry before hand. obviously Naruto and the others will be confused as hell later on, but then it could have Naruto finding out his true past and leading up to the wizards again, ne? Oh, I think you should have Haku live, but if thats inevitable he dies then thats fine. by the way, good job so far and I look forward to seeing how things go with this.

Sa, ja ne!
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