Reviews for On The Ice
Ads S chapter 1 . 6/30
So sweet. And I'm guessing Snuffles is Sirius?
HOAlover4life chapter 1 . 4/19
that was great!
crazy fangirl26 chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
That made me very happy too
and she dreams chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
SO MUCH FLUFFINESS! *bursts into rainbows*
danimaltauro chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
Oh my God, it's amazing! And brilliant! And funny! I love it
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
Aw this was so lovely and special and sweet and different.
sristars chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Okay, look. This was really good. :)
Although there were a lot of cheesy parts... Lily wasn't infatuated with him that much. Sure, she probably liked him, but not that... openly, if you know what I mean.
But your writing was very good. You had a bunch of twists, stuff I like in text, you know... it was very natural, and I loved that about it.
Gosh, it's been EIGHT YEARS since this was published. Almost nine. :OOOO

Sri x
Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
I olny know things about HP As My mom love to watch the movies and read the books.

I am not kidding
crosslight chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
The little bit of dialogue at the end is brilliant; I love funny dialogue. Really cute.
Trash - Remastered chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Adorable! You definitely did both James and Lily justice in this piece - loved it. Great job!
- Irma xoxo
elizaka chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Awww, so adorable!
One With The Fandoms chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
That is so adorable! :) 3 Please keep on writing! Your a brilliant author. I love how you use J.K.'s style of writing when it comes to Harry Potter, but still manage to make a perfect Rick Riordan! TELL ME YOUR SECRETS! ;) 3 xxxxxx
CHM13 chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
I love this, its really cute and is quite a realistic way of them getting together, not like where Lily just spontaneously walks up to James and snogs him. I love it.
AngelfromBeyondBelow chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
well James is better at ice-skating then me on his first attempt I've been 3 times. *sigh* the wworld is so unfair chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
that was really good
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