|Reviews for On The Ice|
| Kathy T chapter 1 . 8/25
cuuuuuuuuuuuteeee I love it!
| berzerkeleyravenclawprefect chapter 1 . 8/8
That gave me so many feels
| thenewsomelibrary chapter 1 . 1/21
aww James you're so cute when you aren't that good at something immedeatly hahaha, and btw, this was pretty amazing! Maybe there was a little too much of these obvious hints in Lily's thoughts, but really, that's critics on a high level. Love, Jana
| Ads S chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
So sweet. And I'm guessing Snuffles is Sirius?
| HOAlover4life chapter 1 . 4/19/2015
that was great!
| crazy fangirl26 chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
That made me very happy too
| and she dreams chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
SO MUCH FLUFFINESS! *bursts into rainbows*
| danimaltauro chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
Oh my God, it's amazing! And brilliant! And funny! I love it
| Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
Aw this was so lovely and special and sweet and different.
| sristars chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Okay, look. This was really good. :)
Although there were a lot of cheesy parts... Lily wasn't infatuated with him that much. Sure, she probably liked him, but not that... openly, if you know what I mean.
But your writing was very good. You had a bunch of twists, stuff I like in text, you know... it was very natural, and I loved that about it.
Gosh, it's been EIGHT YEARS since this was published. Almost nine. :OOOO
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
I olny know things about HP As My mom love to watch the movies and read the books.
I am not kidding
| crosslight chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
The little bit of dialogue at the end is brilliant; I love funny dialogue. Really cute.
| demigoddesses chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Adorable! You definitely did both James and Lily justice in this piece - loved it. Great job!
- Irma xoxo
| elizaka chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Awww, so adorable!
| One With The Fandoms chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
That is so adorable! :) 3 Please keep on writing! Your a brilliant author. I love how you use J.K.'s style of writing when it comes to Harry Potter, but still manage to make a perfect Rick Riordan! TELL ME YOUR SECRETS! ;) 3 xxxxxx