Reviews for Burden of a Destiny |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Idiot boy the Order can turn to the Queen for help. And idiot Author did you even think about that when writing this story? And this Harry's reading is false because of the author. And by the way how old are you when writing this? Because I am 50 going on 51. When reading this. In 1995 I was 22 years old and knowing myself I would be thinking the same as now. and thinking back my me maternal grandfather was in the UK on a combination of vacations and business. And since he was in the country neans he had to report to o the queen since he married into the family when it comes to the American branches. For which I was born into. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry should never have accepted that damn3d quill. Abd second Umbridge needs to be forced to write with her damned quill "I will not reject the truth.I will not believe lies like they are the truth. To do otherwise means a oneway trip to hell at death. Which will occur upon my execution by the Order of the Queen." By doing these things it will teach her and Cornillious and the rest of the Wizarding Community of Britain that they are still subject to the crown and still bound by the laws of the land as given by the Parliament and the reigning monarch. I remember back a few years ago I did a web search about the subject of The Wizarding community of the UK and their still being subject to the laws and said study was done by the various law schools in the UK and it said that they still see the subject of the Crown as and thus answerable to the queen at the time. And any witch or wizard who reject her authority is guilty of treason and sedition and thus as subject to the death penalty which was still in effect at the time in which the Harry Potter story is taking effect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know why so many authors of fanfiction overlook an obvious solution to this mess just as JKR did in canon. That solution was for the Queen and her Prime Minister to remove Fudge and Umbridge. The Magic Users of The United Kingdom of Great Britain are still subjects of the Crown. you read right As JKR said in an interview they would live alongside the non-magicals. and with the way many view the of the royal family they would be guilty of treason and sedition. As d that's not all based on when this is taking place they would still be subject to death. By the Death Penalty. I am an American citizen but yet know of many British kaws because of doing my homeworknalingbeith being a distant cousin of the Royal Family and many of my other British Cousins that are not part of the royal family. I know I wouldn't put up with this shit. and If I was visiting the school I would be ready to remove the toad-faced woman from the school and have her put to death. Then head to the ministry with members if my cousins guard and remove Fudge and have him put to death. |
![]() ![]() Can someone slap her |
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![]() ![]() What's going on?" Harry asked cautiously. Hermione's gaze fell as she fidgeted nervously. "Harry, I think I really messed up," she said softly. "I—I thought maybe you would come around about teaching us so I went ahead and started talking to people. A lot of people want to learn how to defend themselves, Harry, and they want to learn from you. Right now you are the only one who has any sort of training in that area. Harry, we can't just wait around and hope that someone can save us the next time something happens! Please understand!" Not in the least bit sorry she is blatantly exploiting Harry against his will. Harry's eyes narrowed at Hermione for a moment before he stood up and walked towards the door. He couldn't believe Hermione went behind his back like this. Why couldn't she just take 'no' for an answer? Couldn't she understand that he couldn't do it? He couldn't take such a risk, right? Why should he be pulled into this because his guardians felt it best to give him a few private lessons when others did not? Very good points Harry. "Harry please!" Hermione pleaded. "Why are you so afraid to help us?" Afraid? Turning around quickly, Harry glared at Hermione, his anger quickly rising. "How dare you!" he growled through his teeth and his hands tightened into fists. "The last time I checked it wasn't my responsibility to teach the students here how to defend themselves! You have no idea what is really going on here! How could you when you spend all of your time fighting with Umbridge? Umbridge is watching me! The moment I do anything out of line she will inform Fudge who will declare Sirius and Remus unfit guardians! ️️I will be taken away from the only fathers I've ever known!" ️️Excellent and valid points Harry, stick to your guns. Don't allow yourself to be manipulated. At that moment everything that was made of glass in the room (which was only a few mirrors) shattered. Ron and Hermione quickly covered their heads defensively but quickly realized that nothing had hit them. Slowly, both of them looked at Harry who was still standing there, breathing heavily, with his fisted hands shaking in anger. "B—but they're your guardians!" Ron protested nervously. "Dumbledore wouldn't let that happen! Mum and Dad wouldn't let that happen! The Order wouldn't let that happen!" Dumbledore. mum and dad and the order will not be the ones making that decision. If they don't have the power to oust Umbridge they can't guarantee Harry will stay with Sirius and Remus. Hermione carefully approached Harry and rested her hands on the sides of his face, tilting it so their eyes met. "Harry, listen to me," ...sure you are so angry glass is shattering and you are about to explode but I'll grab your face and make demands. ...she said gently. "I would never do anything that would jeopardize your life with Sirius and Remus. But now I'll make my case for exactly that...You're right. It isn't your responsibility to teach us but we weren't as fortunate as you to have guardians who were so proactive. We need this. We need to be ready, at least for our practical exam. If you don't feel comfortable with participating then that is your choice. All I'm saying is that we could really benefit from your knowledge." "This will all be kept a complete secret, Harry," Ron added. Ha ha ha secretsat Hogwarts, sure. Harry has tons of privacy. "Hermione's thought of a few ways to make sure it stays that way. ... What would Sirius and Remus say if you asked them about this?" Emotional blackmail. Harry let out a sigh as his gaze fell, his anger fading quickly. He knew the answer to that question immediately. "They would want me to be involved," ...NO THEY DEFINITELY WOULD NOT!...he admitted. Sirius of course would do anything to break the rules while Remus would insist that study groups are extremely helpful in learning... not under these circumstances. Slowly, Harry met Hermione's gaze again. "You know I hate attention," Harry said softly. "What's stopping everyone from wanting to know about…everything?" Hermione gave Harry a soft smile as tears escaped her eyes. "Us, Harry," she said sincerely. "We will be there every step of the way. Right up until our vast power and influence is not enough. Just give it a chance. If it's too hard or if it doesn't work out then fine. You are on your own buddy. ...At least you gave it a try, right?" Harry closed his eyes and nodded. For some reason he just had a feeling that once he started he wouldn't be able to walk away. He would feel obligated to see it through 'til the end for everyone else's sakes. ...stay strong Harry...As much as he didn't want this, Harry knew he would hate it more if something happened to one of his friends and there had been something he could have done to prevent it, even if it had been teaching them a few spells and charms. HARRY CAVES BIG TIME. Harry just hoped that what Hermione and Ron said were true about the measures they were taking. sure, guaranteed, piece of cake. . The last thing he needed was more trouble from the Ministry. But this couldn't possibly be blundering straight into trouble. Nice sensible use of his vast amounts of free time. |
![]() ![]() Last few sentences were quite the rollercoaster. Harry is furious. Hermione grabs his face and rattles off a bunch of nonsense, he's suddenly not furious, he's guilt tripping Hermione would never risk Harry's guardianship, but we really need you to do this anyway. Harry thinks it's the very worst thing he could do, but he must do it now. Manipulative head games deluxe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, Wow, Wow! The last few chapters were extremely intense. I was surprised by the main character death when I was expecting someone else. I've never read a story where Harry leaves Hogwarts to protect his friends and family, it was a truly noble act. Onward to the next book. Take care and be safe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best Courtroom chapter EVER! I'm so in love with this storyline. Onward I read. Take care and be safe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Harry. So much suffering for him. Attacked at Quidditch by Draco and Vincent. Umbridges detentions and his blood quill scared hand. Remus and Sirius finding out why. Harry just can't catch a break from any direction. Hope things improve for Harry soon. Onward I read. Take care and be safe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far reading book 3 is good. A good birthday chapter surrounded by friends and family. I wonder if Harry will recover enough to return to Hogwarts or will he be too weak? Only time will tell! Onward I go. Take care and be safe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gosh, Harry is such a brat here. I guess he is one in canon too, but at least there it's the first time. In your version he has been a bad friend from nearly the very beginning on. He isn't ready to invest even the tiniest bit in his friendship. Sure, Hermione should not have done what she did, but it's no reason to react the way he does, especially with how he has been acting all the time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, it’s very interesting. But he needs help hiding ng |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great fight scenes. Dying to discover if his parents have been with him the whole time. Maybe it’s the Founders |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry knows how to blame him. He needs to let his inner bitchiness out more often |