Great scene but something awful has to happen at the end of the story

Nice to see him acting maturely

But I want to see him face what’s next. The tension is getting unbearable

Everyone needs to learn to listen to Harry

Maybe summer will go better

Great insights into Harry’s changes.

I will assume the woman is Hogwarts.

Interesting. A nice switch up to Canon

Glad to see Harry learned the best defense is a good offense

Great job having Sirius present. I doubted but nope it was perfect.

I hope it’s prisoners and not Amelia

Great progress

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There’s a positive advance.

Nice to see Harry taking some charge

Amelia let’s Dumbles know she would castrate him if it happens to Susan. All without saying it. Love her

Great takedown, even though she “will return.”

Sadly we don’t show enough of bullies being punished. Thanks

Even in a much better story than canon, the adults continue to withhold information. How many will die this time

This better work.

Harry is about to collapse

If they don’t assign a mind healer soon, I will scream

Because you aren’t sharing the pain, idiot.

Nor is Malfoy’s behavior the teacher’s responsibility. Much like Dudley, Draco is spoiled beyond belief