| Reviews for Burden of a Destiny |
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   csheila chapter 13 . 7/3/2022 Good job on having Hermione and Ron grow up this chapter |
| csheila chapter 12 . 7/3/2022 Thank god, Luna is here |
| csheila chapter 11 . 7/3/2022 Okay, I hate this part both here and in canon It’s like Harry’s IQ drops 20 points a chapter. |
| csheila chapter 10 . 7/3/2022 I adore Hermione but this was one of her worst moments. She’s only concerned about her damn grades |
| csheila chapter 9 . 7/3/2022 Everyone is being an idiot But your version is more entertaining than canon |
| csheila chapter 8 . 7/3/2022 Nicely done But who is spying for Malfoy |
| csheila chapter 7 . 7/3/2022 Let’s hope he keeps his head together. Don’t hook Harry up with Ginny or even Hermione. This kids needs a chance to live,travel,and study post school |
| csheila chapter 6 . 7/2/2022 They should dragged her out after the Dementors attacked. If only for canceling the two aurors |
| csheila chapter 5 . 7/2/2022 Going to ignore granny Ginny Maybe the fight will force the students to believe Harry (nope) The two aurors were probably the death eaters |
| csheila chapter 4 . 7/2/2022 No mind healers? |
| csheila chapter 3 . 7/2/2022 Harry has to cut the shit about not being different. His situation is not improving. Until he recognizes the problem he won’t recover |
| csheila chapter 2 . 7/2/2022 No way he should return |
| csheila chapter 1 . 7/2/2022 Great opening. Harry’s suffering sounds like COPD |
| ScarletRainbow1 chapter 14 . 2/28/2022 I know it's late, since you 'completed' this story in May 2005, but I just realized something. In Chapter 6, Sirius and Remus were talking about Umbridge's functional rights at Hogwarts. Sirius said: "Professor Umbridge is Harry's teacher. It is her duty to instruct Harry in the ways of Defense Against the Dark Arts, nothing more, nothing less. The 'events that occurred in June' are none of her business." "Dolores Umbridge is a Ministry employee!" Fudge exclaimed. "Not anymore," Remus countered calmly. "When you appointed her as the Defense teacher she waved her responsibilities and privileges as your Undersecretary. She has not forfeited her position but she may not act as both. After all, considering what happened yesterday, the stress on her to teach her students to defend themselves must be incredible." If she has now been appointed a High Inquisitor, that should mean that Fudge has waived her teaching position and, with it, any legal right to make detentions. She would no longer have the right to be called a Professor. It would be a conflict of interest. Therefore, what she has put Harry through is just plain wrong. What do you think? |
| ForLoveOfMarvel chapter 11 . 11/23/2021 My review on chapter 1 was completely wrong meant to post it for a completely different harry potter story. |