The “family jewels” conversation around the breakfast table killed me hearing all the men compare their sizes to see whose is bigger something I could totally see happening but the funeral and Sirius’s grave saying “Mischief Managed”

"... Fudge is too addicted to power right now to make any sort of rational decision." ...I wonder if he's a distant relative of Former President Donald Trump... LOL!

It hurts because the lies are what hurts the most.

Honestly I couldn't be harry like they are basically guilting him to teach them even though he said he didn't want to and that makes me feel so frustrated with them like ugh leave poor harry alone.

Love your series so far. Great job, looking forward to the next story! Thanks for sharing.

Finally some developments in the original plot.

But honestly, it is still a slightly altered parenting/support focussed re-telling of canon.
Harry cannot catch a break and learns to lean on his adoptive parents.

A weird focus on irrelevant minutiae of organising the DA, dutiful learning and inducing guilt in your friends.

I think exploring Harry's unique powers could have provided a lot more subplots like exploring hogwarts or encounters with magical creatures.

I'll give you my bowtruckle sketch xD

I have my trials for tnf tomorrow so imma make this quick. THANK YOU FOR MAKING SUCH A GREAT PICE OF WORK. imma move on the sequel after the trials. Legit thx. It's nice to see a op hp fanfic with build up

I was really enjoying this story up until the end. Now it feels to teen angsty and I hate the Remus is dead. I had really hoped that Harry would use his powers to heal him.

Thanks

Wtf why would you do this to us

I really wanna punch Harry in the face rn

Splendide rebound !

After my disappointment of the previous arc, I'm really pleasantly surprised by the way you managed this one. You started a little "canon" but you quickly plunged into full AU mode.

The story has become really fascinating and I am going to read the rest of it.

In negative, I find it unfortunate that you still found it necessary to kill a relative of Harry despite everything but I understand the direction of your story.
However, I have no idea how Harry's departure will fix anything. In the end, if Sirius gets caught, he'll still come back. In addition, Sirius will have to handle this double loss alone. Not very clever on Harry's part and a little stupid on his father's side. It seems clearly to be a somewhat forced and downright awkward attempt to justify Harry's departure.

But whatever...

please don't get annoyed about me pointing that out. if you can't handle a little constructive criticism then you shouldn't putting your work on the internet because someone else might have said that far less politely

Okay you keep using signal instead of single. two completely different spellings and meanings. if you're gonna write at least make the effort to get the right words.