|Reviews for Foster's House|
| usagifuyusummer chapter 15 . 11/4/2020
Just finished reading this, and I think this is a pretty solid AU story of Foster's Home for Imaginary Friends. It feels like reading, maybe if the cartoon had a bonus episode where the characters are grown up/older (the human characters of course) and the setting is gruesome and gritty, kinda like those modern cartoon/comic reboots like Riverdale is from Archie? Riverdale's not that good honestly, but I don't think this AU story is as horrible as that. It sometimes feels like I'm reading a classic horror eldritch story, about a guy content with his life encountering events that will motivate him getting out of it. I don't know if this criticism is easy to understand, but do know I liked it. Thanks for writing this, I hope your writing skills improve more.
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/24/2014
So...the "otherworld" is sorta like a heaven/hell for all things imaginary?
| ceiral chapter 4 . 5/27/2011
F-Frankie disappeared? Wow... This story is going exciting... Keep up the good work... I love this story..
| ceiral chapter 3 . 5/27/2011
I knew it... That weird girl is Frankie...BTW nice story... I like the mysterious type...
| XoXBloodyAliceT.T chapter 15 . 1/3/2011
| Cassie M. M chapter 8 . 7/15/2010
I can't believe it...
FRANKIE IS DUCHESS? O
I thought it was actually going to be the IF Duchess, not Frankie with a code name.
I feel stupid now. XD.
| Cassie M. M chapter 6 . 7/15/2010
I could actually imagine Wilt's voice at certain parts, like when he was talking about Duchess. XD.
How he so quickly killed Frankie...
I freaked out. I was like "WAIT! WTF? I FRIGGEN THOUGHT WILT WAS A GOOD GUY, DAMNIT! DX!"
But, of COURSE, he was evil too. DAMN IT ALL TO HELL, MAN!
Anyways, now that I'm done with that mini-rant, X3, I must say... Nice chapter. I love the flashback at the end, and how it made Wilt feel guilty. It makes him seem more... humane. 3. Somehow. Even though he then proceeded to hack at Frankie's body some more.
| Cassie M. M chapter 5 . 7/15/2010
And psychotic! I swear, the description just now scared the shit out of me. e_e.
Good chap, though. Love how the Bible actually worked. XD.
| Cassie M. M chapter 4 . 7/15/2010
I LOVE the descriptions you have of everyone. Herriman sounded so... weird. So did Eduardo. Can't wait to see Wilt, Coco, and Duchess herself.
Also - I just KNEW that the girl in the first chapter had to be Frankie! I KNEW it! 8D.
I can't believe Duchess made Bloo KILL someone, though! No less, ordered him to kill not JUST Mac's dad, but his MOM as well! I always hated Duchess in the show... Now, even more so. *glares at the IF*
This seriously sounds great, though, and I love how you try to make the chapters at relatively a decent length. .
| The Magic Pocket Turtle chapter 12 . 7/1/2009
This is an interesting AU. I like the idea, and the concept, and you touched on alot of things most fanfictions don't bother to in the way of their plots- mostly guilt about killing, and questioning one's own kill. The only problem I had with the story is that there was very little build-up to certain things (Frankie's "death" didn't have much impact, for example, because her and Mac's relaitionship had no build-up. As far as I was concerned, he'd recently met her, then suddenly lost her, and the reaction didn't match the magnitude of the ralationship.) and there were parts that could have been shown more than simply stated. (For example, in chapter five, you write "Could he really kill someone? And why didn’t he use the Good Book like he did Berry? Was he becoming a killer like these imaginary friends? He felt so unsure of himself right now." This could've been shown in context with the rest of the story. Like when they were walking with Wilt, he might have mulled it over with Frankie, or perhaps in a scene just before they left with him. It just seems less sloppy and is a little more interesting when you show it rather than spell it out in a paragraph of questions.
Anyway, I'm sorry if I'm coming across as harsh. I did enjoy the story very much, and there was a little flair in spots of your prose. I loved the trenchcoat guy's line in chapter 11, "“Yes, I know you were hoping for a happy ending, where you free all the nice imaginary friends, you get Bloo back, and everybody sings and dances and makes merry. Life’s tough, you know.”" That was great, and very true. You also did a great job emphasizing certain important thoughts, like
HELL IS ALL AROUND ME."
Another great line. I liked it, and there were other parts where you did something silmilar.
Anyway, this is a good story. It could use a little work, but not a total rehaul.
| Lystius chapter 12 . 3/22/2008
WTF! Is there going to be a second one? Do the imaginary friends come to life? does terence try and kill mac? so many questions unanswered... Still, five stars regardless.
| Sir Edward chapter 12 . 9/7/2007
Frankie... EVIL... Oh the horror... : (
And here I was mourning her death, and she was the evil one... O_O
Man that made me sad.
Keep up the good work.
| Sir Edward chapter 7 . 9/7/2007
This story is so... sad...
You killed Frankie! : (
Oh... that makes me cry.
Well, keep up the good work.
| B gal chapter 12 . 2/3/2007
that was completely scarry. I'm going to not the happy things now for the rest of my life.
| Neros Urameshi chapter 11 . 2/3/2007
Oh no... I thought things are back to normal, but Frankie STILL LIVES!.!.! I don't like this at all! Things are getting pretty bad...