|Reviews for The Glass House|
| Gwen chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
The summary reminds me of Thir13en ghost.
| Serendipitists chapter 2 . 2/21/2005
dont tell me its going to be a love story any way please update soon
| KaraKurama chapter 1 . 1/11/2005
There is no script allowed here. I just thought I'd let you know before someone reports it.
| Bloom Flower chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
Lol. Its great! *Extinguishes fire from bush*
| Yuugiamethyst chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
It's ok, it could be a bit more detailed but I guess its only the introduction soo, its ok for the first chapter. Hmm I would reccomened not writing your stories in script mode, you see it takes out some of the vividness and descriptivness which are 2 elemntal elements, you could be a tad more descriptive and vivid but try not to go overboared 'kay? I hope you don't take this wrongly because I think it could be a good story and I'm just trying to give a few pointers . I also hope you leave Botan and Hiei in the story Kuwabara too, I just think they are all key elements to make the story work, well good luck and Bye. Update soon.