|Reviews for Second Chance|
| mapplepie chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
finally! its so hard to find an 'edward travels back in time, or something similar to that' story! Please continue this story!
| reighost chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
the date set in eds watch is the day the brothers burnt their house down...
| Iniysa chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
I know its been along time since you started this story but I really want to see what happens next! :)
| fightingstoryaddiction chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
please update soon!
| IpizzippyReads chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
i can't believe i just read this fic now. it was two years since their mom died when ed and al tried to transmute her and it was 3rd october 1910 when they burned their house and left for the military which was months after they transmuted their mother because ed's hair was longer there. just thought i'd tell you so you know. anywho, i like where this is going update soon, okay?
| The Dark Dragon Hidden In Shadows chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
Nice, hope you update soon.
| ZWngDragon chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
Ahh come on arn't you gonna update... can't believe you started such a good story and left us all hanging
| Requiem of Silence chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
Ahh . . . ah . . . Okay, this was interesting! Mustang, the past. I can imagine. He'd be twice as likely to be Fuhrer. Scary.
To answer your question, I believe it was about one year afterwards, because they were nine and ten when their mother died and tried to resurrect her at ten and eleven. Yes, because four years later the story takes place and Al is 14 and Ed is 15 and then turns 16 later on. That's not a spoiler, by the way. You know it's gonna happen.
A few mistakes here and there and the conversations seem a little forced but other than that it was good!
| supermelisa3149 chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
Very good story
(1)The day that written in Eds watch is the day they burned down there house
| Night-Owl123 chapter 1 . 1/11/2005
update soon! _
| XSasukeRebornX chapter 1 . 1/11/2005
It's the day that they burned their house down...
(though I'm not too sure on the date, it's either Oct 3; 10; or 11)
| Gozilla chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
Very interesting! Please update soon! -
| Lluvia-the-Wolfgirl chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
Wah! roy, too! how'd that happen? the date in the watch, is the date they burned the house down, which means it was about a year after she died, because it took ed a year to get used to the automail.
| Psycho King chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
I've seen this idea before... but not for FMA...
I'll say the same thing to you that I do for the same kind of story in other series:
1. Don't have Ed and Roy dominate every situation with their newfound knowledge.
2. Be selective on where the story is going to go completly off-canon.
3. remember... 'The more things change, the more things stay the same' aka some events are going to happen no-matter what...
Do a good job and I'll continue reviewing...
P.S: I believe there was a shorter timeframe between when their mother died and when Roy showed up... but you can explain it away with Roy having to do something to advance his agenda...
P.P.S: This is the first FMA story to go on my favorites list... _