Reviews for Twin Flames |
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![]() ![]() ![]() *faints* OMG an update! An update after two months! please post more SOON |
![]() ![]() thank u!thank u!thank u!i love it!i love it!i love it!I LOVE IT!please update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE it! I can't wait till you update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() But... wat about Alex? :( great story, where are they going? tel me. write more soon plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love your story - especially the sex-ed crash course. It was awesome how you made Jack so jittery about moving into society but she gets the hang of it pretty quickly. Excited for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() This is a really great story. You keep the characters acting like themselves. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good,i cant wait to see where your going with this. Keep up the good work,i see Jack heading in an interesting direction. You could maybe give us a little more insight into what Riddick is thinking,like when he is talking to himself in his mind. |
![]() ![]() ![]() its a change, not a big one, but a change. its an interesting direction. |
![]() ![]() Glad to see an update. This was a good chapter showing Jack starting to have a normal life but willing to give it up in a heartbeat to stay with Riddick. Keep it coming please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. I'm glad that Jack is growing up a little. I hope you update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! An update! I agree, not quite sure where you're going with this spin-out chapter. But it's good. However, this doesn't seem to be Riddick in character...or Jack. In this chapter it looks like you're losing them. :) Just some happy remarks, it was still AN EXCELLENT CHAPTER to an EXCELLENT story. Congrats! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw poor Jack she had to leave Alex. I feel bad for her,but at least she gets to be with Riddick. Hope you update lsoon. |
![]() ![]() m im lovin it. please please please update soon...im addicted |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the update! Oh...I can't wait to see what's going to happen to them next... |
![]() ![]() ![]() *crys* my goshness ive waited so...so soo...so very very very...very long...for and update... *kisses writers feet* thanku...but i have to say not ur best, but im just so happy to have a chapter...twas enough to help me sleep at night.. keep going...you have a little writers block dont you? thats why its taken so long.. just go with the flow..shall be waiting for the nxt chappie. faithful fan! |