Reviews for Twin Flames
TheMoosey chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
Ok... I've never reviewed any of your stuff... but usually I give a play-by-play of the chapter, so you know what I really think, and not... "that's great, post soon!" but I couldn't stop anywhere because it was so freaking good! All I wanted to do was read read read!

"...what you do if your attacker isn't some drunk pedophile who doesn't know his dick from brain." -grins- aw... well written!

well technically... her hands wouldn't be able to callouse (sp?) in twenty days, but for the sake of the story, I'll let it slide. -grins-

"God isn't a bad thing, just an asshole." that's a great way to put it...

wow again

I think I just found one of the most amazing stories!
anon chapter 10 . 2/24/2005
That's a unique story! And very well-written! I highly enjoyed it! Update!
dbrown chapter 10 . 2/23/2005
Please, Please, Please update! The suspense is killing me. This is one of the best stories I have ever read. I love the fact the you have kept Jack young for now. Most stories just jump to her being of legal age and never explore the feelings that she must endure growing up and also how Riddick and Iman respond to her.

I love it!

Please update or at least let us know if you will (and I so hope you will)!
lcores chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
I love this story, please write more soon!
philosopherknight chapter 10 . 2/21/2005
I really like this story and I hope you write more. Its highly original and very well writen.
Allie chapter 10 . 2/14/2005
Wow, this story is truly magnificent. The characters are flawless, perfect. It's incredible. The relationship between Jack and Riddick is evolving so naturally and unforced. When Riddick has to explain basically the "birds and the bees" to Jack it is both funny as well as poignantly true to character for both of them. All I have to say is “bravo” and “when can we please get an update?”. I can only hope the answer to the latter is, “As soon as is humanly possible.” To the Author: Keep up the amazing writing so we can see where it is you plan to take this. Thank you for a so far enjoyable and highly satisfying story to read.

pyro chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
O MAN! i aboslutely love this are an amazing writer...this is like the best Pitch Black story out there! please please update soon! you are extremely missed!
mela chapter 10 . 2/11/2005
I think I speek for everyone when I say:

Drusilla Leigh chapter 1 . 2/9/2005
One word - perfect! This is a great story - keep writing, can't wait to read more.
beautifulenvy chapter 9 . 2/9/2005
The voices in this story are exactly on mark. It is honestly one of the best PB fics I have read. I really hope you update soon, it would be a shame to stop writing what could be a legandary PB story.
magdalen13 chapter 10 . 2/9/2005
Wow. You have got these characters and worlds down. The dialogue is exactly right, and I love Jack's voice. This is the post-PB fic I would want to write if I had the time to write one. Instead I'll just haunt the site until you post more.


fanficfan chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
It's very good, high quality, fanfiction. Please update!
S.M. Howard chapter 10 . 2/4/2005
you have to update!
Anna chapter 10 . 2/4/2005
Hey! This story is really developing well! You've had me on the edge of my chair since this part came out. Pretty pretty please find time to update. Love the subtle ways their relationship is changing. Some people are calling for Iman's future wife to be nice and it would be great if she could show Jack how to be a total knock out,but...I kind of like the idea of Jack butting heads with this woman so that Riddick gets a chance to see other elements of her character. That said you can totally ignore my comments because I think its fantastic whatever you do...I'm just doing what tells me and writing a supposedly, "well rounded critque". Belive me no flames here.
brainfear chapter 10 . 2/3/2005
Great story. More please!
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