It's good to see that Jack and Imam worked things out.

"No more wanting to ghost Imam?" - My favorite quote of this chapter.

He kissed her on the forehead? Aww... how sweet.

Oh shit, the training. Poor Jack.

Great Chapter! i absolutely love this story, it's so AWESOME! there's hardy any stories that have Jack and Riddick together after the Pitch Black incident.

Your a great writter, keep up the good work. i can't wait for the next chapter. buh-bye!

i love your story please keep going

Awesome fic, really brilliant! Keep the chapters commin!

Hey everyone,

Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback you all have been heaping on me. I really, really appreciate it. I'm not used to not being able to reply individually to each piece, and maybe there's a way to do it that I haven't discovered yet, but until then, I'll just do a mass thanks here.

I do have one request, though, because although the first time someone brought this up they were polite, the second time... well, let's just say, i don't like being told what to do.

Don't tell me to change the title just becuase there's another fic out there by the same name. Honestly, who cares? If I go to any archive that my stories are at, there's bound to be at least two or three under the same title. It doesn't mean theyr'e the same story. I'm reading the other Apprentice story and you know what? My fic is *nothing* like hers. Anyone who is afraid I might be stealing her ideas can read mine and see how different they are.

That being said, though, I don't like the title to this fic (I just don't like the reason I'm being told to change it). I dont' want it to be Apprentice; it's not a good title for this fic. So, if anyone has any suggestions, I'd be happy to hear them. I can write quickly and easily and ideas come to me in a snap; I struggle and sweat blood and tears over titles. So please, either drop me a review or e-mail at anassumednmaed if you have any title suggestions or any other things you want to say.

Thanks!

T. Fowler

Another lovely chapter. *smile*

-Elf

This is awesome. You should drop everything your doing and update! I mean now! Come on chop chop! :D

Hey, interesting stuff, but you're going to want to rethink the name of your story. There's already a fanfic called "Apprentice," by Ardath Rekha, and it's LEGENDARY. You don't want people thinking you're ripping her off. It used to be on ff.n but they took down all the NC-17 stuff, so it's gone from here. But almost everybody in PB fandom knows it.

this ROCKS! I love it!

my fave line is

Riddick might be a killer, but he's my killer.

He's mine too! heehee

I just love their relationship..it's so real...it's so them...I have read few stories where Jack is still young, and this is one of the best...can't wait for more

"I'm a killer, holy man," Riddick had growled, just three days ago. "Not a monster. Not that kind."

I love Riddick! I love him so much!

and the fun continues...i am loving this...u have just entered my fave stories...

"One day, Jack, you're going to need to know how to fight. Especially with a face like that. Now get some fucking sleep or we'll start training right now."

That's an amazing line...wow...i so love it...it's so Riddick...

I've finally visited fanfic after a few weeks, and i am so happy to read your story...I'm really enjoying it...yay! I have more to read

oo jack got pretty pissed. well, update again soon

nice chapter. i liked it. update again soon

I totally understand Jack - Riddick sweaty in the gym - ::drools::

more please