Reviews for Twin Flames |
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![]() ![]() ![]() inside the head of a young one... I love it. I love this. I love that this was living in your head and you shared it with us. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my. this is such an awesome start. I love starting from this point, and all the remembrances add to the telling instead of clogging it with noise. YOur story is not noise... It is an awesome composition... :D (turns giggling, and dives into the remainder of the story like into a pool.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noooooooo fry died to raptor :,,,( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() Dont stop now what happens? |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I LOVE this story! I'm glad that I stumbled upon it. I read it all in one shot. So much takes place with the storyline that it stays really interesting. And I think it's true to the characters. I see that it's been in progress for a very long time. I am glad that you have kept with it. If this the end of the story, I can dig it. But I have to say that I'm a bit greedy and would love to read more. Ya know if you're up for it and all. No pressure. But I'm not above bribes. There could be cookies involved. In the meantime I'll have to take a look around your page and see what else I can get into. Thanks for the story. Take care. (; |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was good to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh man. the trauma. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very believable. I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() good job, setting up conflict. Poor Jack. Poor Riddick. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Riddick smiled a shark's smile" is a great line. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man. I really like your Riddick. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness they're free they're out of the planet I'm so excited to see what you write next heavy with anticipation. |