Reviews for Twin Flames
Skyrere chapter 3 . 2/19/2020
inside the head of a young one... I love it.
I love this.
I love that this was living in your head and you shared it with us. XD
Skyrere chapter 1 . 2/19/2020
oh my.
this is such an awesome start.
I love starting from this point, and all the remembrances add to the telling instead of clogging it with noise.
YOur story is not noise...
It is an awesome composition...
:D
(turns giggling, and dives into the remainder of the story like into a pool.)
hellion117 chapter 4 . 12/2/2019
Noooooooo fry died to raptor :,,,(
acetwolf94 chapter 28 . 1/19/2019
I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!
Heather chapter 25 . 11/21/2018
Dont stop now what happens?
Norma Cenva 626 chapter 25 . 10/13/2018
OMG I LOVE this story! I'm glad that I stumbled upon it. I read it all in one shot. So much takes place with the storyline that it stays really interesting. And I think it's true to the characters. I see that it's been in progress for a very long time. I am glad that you have kept with it. If this the end of the story, I can dig it. But I have to say that I'm a bit greedy and would love to read more. Ya know if you're up for it and all. No pressure. But I'm not above bribes. There could be cookies involved. In the meantime I'll have to take a look around your page and see what else I can get into. Thanks for the story. Take care. (;
Viomaat chapter 25 . 7/6/2018
This was good to read.
Viomaat chapter 22 . 7/6/2018
oh man. the trauma.
Viomaat chapter 21 . 7/6/2018
very believable. I like it.
Viomaat chapter 20 . 7/6/2018
nice
Viomaat chapter 16 . 7/6/2018
good job, setting up conflict. Poor Jack. Poor Riddick.
Viomaat chapter 13 . 7/6/2018
"Riddick smiled a shark's smile" is a great line.
Viomaat chapter 9 . 7/6/2018
Oh man. I really like your Riddick.
Viomaat chapter 3 . 7/6/2018
nice work!
badbunny1818 chapter 25 . 6/16/2018
Oh my goodness they're free they're out of the planet I'm so excited to see what you write next heavy with anticipation.
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