Reviews for Twin Flames
Peggy chapter 12 . 4/24/2011
This is a great story. I hope one day it will get updated. :)
randomreviewer chapter 12 . 2/21/2011
This is the BEST Riddick story on FanFic - honest. It would be lovely if you updated. But if you don't there is nothing to be done about that :)
ziona3000 chapter 12 . 1/13/2011
So I've read this story over the last 2 days and I'm totally bummed that you've not finished! You've got a great story going here! I'd love to see where you go with it.

ugh! All the good stories never get finished. sigh.
ziona4000 chapter 2 . 1/13/2011
I'm sure you've long ago let this story go but I had to say... wow to the last line Riddick said to Jack at this chapter. Made goose bumps crawl all over my skin. Little hairs standing up.

phew!
tetisheri chapter 12 . 12/23/2010
i really wish you would of continued this story. it is extremely well written. and i wish i could read more
ArtLightLove chapter 12 . 10/15/2010
to bad you never finished this it was very good.
Brimseye chapter 5 . 9/14/2010
hehe nice..
Brimseye chapter 4 . 9/14/2010
hmm makes you wonder the thoughts going through her head with all this going on around her and to her.
Brimseye chapter 3 . 9/14/2010
OOO nice chapter!
Brimseye chapter 2 . 9/14/2010
hehe I like her reaction to Riddick's words. sleep now or we will start training now. made me lol
Brimseye chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
Awesome start! I like it.
bubble2008 chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
I totally fell in love with this story and wish you would continue it b/c it is definatly one of the better ones out there! PLEASE CONTINUE
Teacher's Secretary chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
Alright now that I know your alive and well and still writing I humbly ask that you continue the story. I've just gotten back to reading riddick fanfics and I can honestly

Say that yours has been the best out of the six I've read today. I actually cried out in anguish once I realized I was

On the last chapter. I absolutely love the way you've written the story this far and am liking the innocent naiive yet dangerous way you portray Jack. I also like the high school drama thrown into it. Nothing worse than going to school. I'm actually waiting for some

Kind of confrontation or something to happen during school just to see how Jack will deal with it. I'm seriously hoping you'll read my review and decide to finish the story but if not I enjoyed the story while it lasted.

With much respect for your

Awesome

Writing ability,

Blue
Care Bear Assassin chapter 12 . 7/11/2009
I haven't read a lot of Riddick fanfiction lately, but I'm glad that I found this story. The flow of the story is great and I love the way you portray Jack and Riddick. Please tell me you plan to continue the story!
EmiJa chapter 12 . 6/27/2009
Are you going to write more? This story really is good and should totally be continued! I love how Riddick explains everything to her and how she's close to Imam. I also like how trouble seems to follow her.
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