| Reviews for Twin Flames |
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   Sutosa chapter 12 . 7/6/2005 oh no! I'm all out of chapters, and I want to know what's going to happen! What's a girl to do? write, please, and hurry up in doing so. I'll put this baby on my favourites and check it every other day, so if you write, I'll read. oh, and btw: It's GREAT to read a story from a teenage girls point of view. I love it! -keep it up ;) |
| Shannon chapter 12 . 6/30/2005 oh man, this is so awesome! I almost cried when I got to the last chapter. The character development and interaction is so awesome, and I love how you're not having Riddick and Jack slobbering all over each other in the first three chapters. Development is good. Her growing up and how he reacts to it is way cool to read about, and I love how you portray them. Awesome job, please update soon! Shannon |
| LeaScott chapter 12 . 6/28/2005 omg. its so good. cant wait for the next chapter. |
| Sarah chapter 12 . 6/24/2005 Really good story,my friend and I are reading it and we can't wait untill the next keep them comming! . |
| Allison chapter 12 . 6/16/2005 Oh. Poor Jack will never have a normal life...But she does have Riddick. Oh the sacrifices we make ;) You are an amazing story teller, and I love every bit of this plotline and I can get lost in it all so easily. I might suggest a proof reader just to catch the little things like chapter 10 not ending with a complete sentence and the like. Again, this is so fantastic and eagerly anticipate the next installment. |
| Bloodrednight25 chapter 12 . 6/13/2005 Hey chica, great chapter. Totally loved it, kinda short, but still great. I can't wait to read another chatper. I can't believe Jack's gonna just leave the life she made, but then again, i can cause likes one big shit hole. Can't wait to read another chapter, so do what you do, and up-date soon. elle the evil one |
| koshka chapter 12 . 6/12/2005 In a roundabout way, this chapter shows how deep the connection between Jack and Riddick really is. Jack has found that "normal" life, the lack of which led to Riddick's and Jack's "abnormal" lives in the first place. She likes that life, but drops it with two words at Riddick's request. The good life may be, probably is, illusory. Their connection is real and the only thing to be trusted. Thank you so much for sharing your story, I hope to see more soon. |
| cool chapter 12 . 6/10/2005 tell me more tell me more... did they get very far? (cool huh?) |
| marie chapter 12 . 6/9/2005 Thank you! Thank you! Thank you for updating! |
| atlantiandreamer chapter 12 . 6/9/2005 Great story, can't wait for you to update! |
| NightmareWeaver chapter 12 . 6/7/2005 Wow. This is really good! |
| Snowgurl54 chapter 12 . 6/5/2005 good |
| vinbaby19 chapter 12 . 6/4/2005 Awesome story. I hope you update more. |
| AlexisStarFlame chapter 12 . 6/4/2005 love love love love love! (say it sing-song-y and you'll get what I was trying to do). They are leaving together and I love it. I just wish their could have been some violence at school but I get why there couldnt be. But not that Alex is gone we can move on to Riddick and Jack being together! Right? Update again soon, summers coming so there might be more time for writing? Maybe? kmm |
| Letreen chapter 12 . 6/3/2005 Whoa! My first time reading this story! Love it when it's from a child's perspective. Poor Jack's like kinda lost, isn't she.. How old is Jack by then? Previously you'd mentioned she's twelve, and now? Muazx and huggies to Riddick! Letreen |