Reviews for Less Then Obedient
spike'smate chapter 5 . 12/20/2012
tara to the rescue
spike'smate chapter 3 . 12/20/2012
bad xander rubber ducky
impeccableblahs chapter 8 . 6/12/2009
lol, oh my..never have i been a fan of spike/buffy. i'm a die-hard angel fanatic. seriously, borderline fan girl back in the day, (it's odd, you know, i'm opposite to most things you enjoy, lol), but i couldn't resist a 'bella enchanted' version of btvs. that, was hilarious.

"Tara's gone mad." For some reason on reading that I erupted into endless fits of giggles. That was so.. xander, lol. chapter six, by far the funniest piece of literature i've read in ages. of course, it was touch and go there for a bit (the killing the slayer part) but hilarious nonetheless.

ugh, you're amazing.
emac66 chapter 7 . 4/18/2008
Cute story. Only suggestion is to re-read you work. Perhaps get a beta to assist. Spelling and grammatical errors cause it to be a bit jolty. I had to interpret alot as to what you meant. Just a suggestion, not a slam. Keep up the work though!
Secret Slayer chapter 8 . 10/11/2007
it was good story and was very funny )great job!
Secret Slayer chapter 5 . 10/11/2007
OMG! tara's gone mad...LOL! my fave line ever ) love the ending, cant wait to read more )
Secret Slayer chapter 3 . 10/11/2007
OMG! the rubber ducky soon as i saw the first line i was in fits of laughter! you are evilly funny, i look forward to the next chapter, he he! )
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands chapter 8 . 12/2/2005
HeeHeeHee! Fantastic story! I really enjoyed it.
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands chapter 7 . 12/2/2005
Every girl enjoys hearing that...
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands chapter 6 . 12/2/2005
DumDumDum! Awesome! I love it so far...I must run along to the next chapter now...
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands chapter 5 . 12/2/2005
That last line made me roll...So funny...
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands chapter 4 . 12/2/2005
A twist...wasn't expecting that...hum...
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands chapter 3 . 12/2/2005
More and more trouble for the poor
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands chapter 2 . 12/2/2005
Hello, Spike, and welcome to hell. lol Awesome.
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
The story idea alone is awesome, and the prologue is quite well written! Great job!
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