Reviews for Spilt
Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
I love this! It's so realistic and so in character and so well written! :D :3 I love it! Bravo!
Samairi chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Sque! Hot chocolate is always the best place to start. :D I loved it. Once again, great job! I'd love to see more of Sasuke and Naruto in these interesting scenarios... ;D
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Nice story!
candycloud44 chapter 1 . 12/1/2008

that was very nice indeed.
Supreme Dictator of the World chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
aw this is too cute. i love how they both acted like nothing happened. the accidental kiss is one of my favorite cliches and u made it even better for me. :)

miley1006 chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
Aw, so fluffy, I LOVE FLUFFY STUFF! XD
kyuubi11 chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
hahahhaah LOL

that was soo cute !

such a cute scenario to come up with _
Lady Chou101 chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
i love you! your an amzing writer, i just hope u write more SASUnaru soon, i mean i adore ur two fics of them, they are both in character, naruto is slightly ooc, but i adrore him cuz he's so cute, i (painfully) await your next update.

are u even updating this story?

is it complete or what? if so, then mark it as a complete one, anyway, i absolutly adore ur sasunaru fics, and i want more, but i dont think ur alive, or even updating on sasunaru anymore right? right?

*sigh* such talent...

rest in peace my dear author...*prays for you*


i really hope ur not really dead, that would be...



humiliating? (on my part)

ugh! i'm rambling, i ALWAYS do that, gosh, i need to break that stupid habbit, *starts singing "i'm breaking the habbit" by linkin park*


c ya _
Fields of View chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
aww! love the everyday-life sort of feel! I love the feeling of lay-back and (sort of) peace of the little moments Sasuke and Naruto shared in this shot. It makes me feel so warm and fuzzy on the inside! haha great job!
wind-master-redmoon chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
ohh ths is really goo can't wait for another chapter
Azamiko chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
red-headed psychopaths wanted chapter 1 . 2/13/2007
aw kawaii!

keep it up! :D

Ms Trick chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
I love your style of writing. It's funny and poetic all at once. That's difficult to pull off. Plus the story itself was to die for. Both Naruto and Sasuke were very in-character. LOVED THIS! Don't stop writing!
NekoAnime chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
Wow, that was a really well written... one-shot, first chapter of more to come? *looks hopeful* Actually it works well as a one-shot. Poor Naruto, I could just imagine his forlorn expression as his hot cocoa trailed away before his eyes. *snickers* I really liked the way that you decided to end this as well. And with the way you began the story it gave us just enough insight, knowing the Naruto universe, that Sasuke's family was probably dead and the same for Naruto, without actually having to state it. The whole trip outside was endearing and the rough and tumble of waking up was amusing. Great job on this, I hope to see more from you in the future.
anonymous chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
that was so cute! nice job
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