|Reviews for Jusenkyo Bottled Water|
| xThomas2 chapter 1 . 2/6/2019
This is so bad lol
| Pete Zaitcev chapter 1 . 12/31/2004
I am really sorry to admit it, but this work is awfully difficult to read ( ch3 at present). It is too choppy, even if we discount author's interjections. But with those it is posititvely disjoint. Kaleidoscopic scene changes add to the effect. I have no idea how this can be improved and I suspect I simply miss the main idea completely. Maybe it was all by design.
The idea of bottled Jusenkyo water sounds very promising. Sleepingbear's Avatar uses a barrel of it, for instance. I'm surprised this is not used more often.
| Twisted Mackeral chapter 2 . 4/16/2004
Um. OK. Didn't Ranma and Shampoo just die? And now they're back alive again? Well that dont make a lick of sense.
| opal eyes chapter 3 . 10/18/2002
| Bunnylord5 chapter 1 . 12/3/2001
Ha!hahahahaha! ohohoohmmmmm sorry. Ahahahaha! hehe. hem hohehehe haha!
| Raven-Of-A-Took chapter 3 . 7/5/2001
kewl story. keep writing!
| Digiriven chapter 3 . 6/13/2001
| Atomic Chainsaw chapter 1 . 3/4/2001
Hmm,spring of drowned girl and spring of drowned boy water could save transexuals a lot of money..
| Lady Omega chapter 1 . 12/20/2000
| Vina chapter 1 . 12/1/2000
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2000
Otay... I was cool. Yeah I liked it except I kept getting lost a some point or the other. _