Reviews for Collision Course
BananaCucumbers chapter 5 . 4/10
Itachi. Put in Itachi. Please?
Guest chapter 9 . 3/20
Very intriguing!
Okami chapter 9 . 11/25/2014
Ok, I've read it and IT'S JUST SO AWESOME. You seem to forget about this story (just 6,5 years after last updating, not that much, really...) but I would love to read another chapter. One can't just start a great story and end it up in such a moment! Show some mercy!
PrideViola chapter 7 . 11/6/2014
Hey! Love your story! But I can't help but notice in chapter 2 that you inspired this fic by the guards -dragonmaster8, but sadly it got deleted.. I was wondering if you have the guards story? Like in Word or something? I would like to read it... Thank you for your time!
Yami no Tsuki chapter 9 . 6/18/2014
No! No, this is so good...
The plot and characters are awesome, and your writing is pretty good. It improves throughout, as well. Couple of notes, though: Manda is right, not Mando, I'm fairly sure the Toad Boss is called Gamabunta, not Gama Oyabun or whatever you said, and I think in the first chapter or so you called Kakashi "Kaka-sensei" a couple times. I wasn't sure of it was a typo or because they slur the "shi", making it hard to distinguish. Ummm, there were more mistakes in the early chapters, but it steadily got a lot better and by the end there hadn't been any for ages. So I don't remember them.
Oh, but I think you (for the most part) used colloquial Japanese expressions pretty well.
Ja, I hope you haven't given up on this! Good job :)
Yami
Las chapter 9 . 4/13/2014
Okay this is a good story and all, but... I'm getting impatient! When are you gonna reveal their identies to the school?!
XxXFoxieXxX chapter 9 . 3/30/2014
Wow, this is the first story that used a (reasonably) cliche story line and made it original! Please update you've got me gripped now! ;P
Alibi Nonsense chapter 9 . 11/29/2013
I love this: it's gotten so tense! I love the way you've set this up! It gripped me throughout and I just... you've kept this in character and grammatically good, you've twisted the plot around to make it yours and added extra bits and... I just love it. XD
Alibi Nonsense chapter 3 . 11/28/2013
Can I be really horrible and nitpick a phrase of Hagrid's? I checked your profile and it was devoid of 'nationality', so I am going to assume you are American, since you speak English and you used the phrase 'afternoon tea' (I am really sorry if I am wrong, but bear with me). Um... I'm English and we don't have afternoon tea. People assume we do, but we don't. We have Breakfast, Lunch and Dinner/Tea. Some old people have 'elevenses' (a cup of tea and a biscuit at eleven or so), but afternoon tea no longer exists. I will most definitely review properly at the end of your story.
NamiNavigator chapter 5 . 11/10/2013
I want Itachi! I love your style of writing, it's really cool. :3
Fi Suki Saki chapter 9 . 10/14/2013
...and when i hoping this to continue... #sighed hopelessly

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This is Great crossover of HP/Naruto !

Sasuke became student and in Slytherin, Naruto became the new DADA teacher! XD wow!

Unique!

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What Naruto mean by attached? Sasuke attached to this mission? How? He seems 'normal'...
Yuki082 chapter 9 . 4/24/2013
really good.
more please!
-Yuki
Yuki082 chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
the portkey was clever.
-Yuki
zei1827 chapter 9 . 4/21/2013
it's been years, but will this story get an update?
i'm not a fan of crossovers, for i haven'tread anything that had smoothly integrated the two worlds.
and now i've read yours.
and, i admit, you're amazing :)
mizukikage chapter 9 . 4/12/2013
Nooooos... I was getting very into this story...and no more for now it seems. I hope uni or hr job don't drive u batty.
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