Biatch this was, hands down, one of the most captivating, alluring, excruciatingly beautiful fanfictions I have ever read. Each freaking sentence had me on edge, nothing of this seemed cliche, you my dude are a master of freaking suspense. I am in true unbridled awe. The ships were handled so efficiently and realistically without seeming dull, the characters were sO IN CHARACTER. The lemon was not so graphic for it to resemble an Icha-Icha book but sufficiently enough for it to strike that cord within that makes you not want to turn your eyes away from the screen. It was so realistic, I think that was what I loved the most tbh, it felt so freaking real, so down to earth, so possible, like yeah there were a lot of crappy situations that you don’t see very often in this stories but-dude well that’s just LIFE, it’s not always-in fact it almost never is-rainbows and butterflies and happily ever afters, it’s complicated times and fucked up scenarios and decisions and choices but sometimes, sometimes you just have to tear and bare through it all to finally find that much awaited light at the end of the dark tunnel and god damn if it wasn’t just so beautiful and well written. I loved your Hinata, truly, I also loved that you didn’t actually made her to be the only focus of the story, but I LOVE YOU EVEN MORE, have a fulfilling life. Kudos to you forever, okay I got way ahead of myself, bye.

Such a painful and exquisite story. I adore how much these characters remain true to their anime selves. Poor Neji had to endure so much but I feel so sorry for Hanabi still. Excellent work. I love everything about this. The OC characters were so lovable and relatable. Tetsuo was definitely one of my favorites. I hope to see more of this pairing from you. Thank you for this masterpiece.

I cried

God, I avoid reading depressing things but your story is well told, I feel a deep melancholy with the end. I honestly didn't expect that Hinata was going to marry Naruto so quickly, and I didn't expect lemon naruhina either (I don't like the couple, but I know it was necessary for this fic, which makes it heavier to read).

Hanabi was disturbing. Although she was so intelligent, I found it very easy in the way they discovered her with Neji, literally they have byakugan eyes, I find it strange that she did not worry, unless it was worth shit everything and that she was already tired of everything.

I am sorry, but for me it is insufferable that Neji accepted that another man touched Hinata, nothing assured him that Naruto would make her happy and also did not know if he would be rejected by her, Neji never tried to show feelings for her, and then when it was already Too late he realized he loved her. That is why this fic is sad but beautiful at the same time, I don't know how it is like rain, a gray city with little light of hope, like life.

I knew the fic would be depressing, it's like listening to sad music on purpose.

This is my first time reading a fanfic from this author, and I was so wrong to expect fluff with a bit of mature scenes. I'll start with the obvious: the writing, the flow, the imagery-all were so unique and perplexing. But the plot. Damn. For each chapter I had to put down my phone and re-examine my life. Nothing can prepare you for the fucked-upness here, which I hated at first. The Hanabi x Neji scene still scars me, but damn, that's why this story is so memorable. Hanabi's descent to insanity was just the cherry on top. I loved the three-dimensional take on the women here. Ugh. The theme was mature in every sense of the word, and I LOVED it. This reminded me of the real world.

Wow okay, that truly was a journey. And it was beautiful. I actually loved every character in their own way. Including Hanabi, even though she was a terrifyingly twisted megalomaniac. I even enjoyed Naruto's arc and I thought you handled that all very well. Even though I wish I could have seen a little more of what happened between Naruto and Hinata and maybe even a little more insight into Hinata and Neji's relationship. I also understand how adding these things wouldn't add to the story at all. You added exactly was was needed to tell this story not too much and not too little, and every sentence felt chosen and brought us to the place we needed to be. It was quite sad, and felt very mature. Like a slice of life. Hinata was a very strong character and it made me so happy that it ended the way it did. Very well written, and very thought out. Thank you so much for taking the time to complete this story! (14 years ago goddamn) 3 sweet dreams 3

Very interesting.

Jesus Christ. Talk about daddy issues. smh.

goddamn.

There's this kind of... cold mature realism I've felt this chapter. This kind of heavy dullness that I feel coming off of these character's. And not in a bad way. Like they've accepted the things they cannot change. idkk. feelings.

I always do love me some Naruhina moments... Their relationship is quite sweet and cute. The ending was a bit ambiguous, thankfully I don't have to wait for an update to see what happens next hehe. Id say its quite in character for Naruto to drop a line a cheesy as 'Lake Hinata' Nice one nard. 3

Okay so I'm really enjoying everything so far. Hanabi's a smart little brat with something up her sleave. Hinata is a subtly strong respectable character I find it interesting seeing this side of her. Neji is... I just love Neji in general and it makes me happy to read a story where he's breathing. I surprisingly really enjoyed the Hinata and Shino moment from the previous chapter I couldn't tell if Shino was ooc but I figured we don't really get to see the dynamics of team 8 in the manga and anime so it could be totally plausible for Shino to react in such a sweet teenage boy kinda way. haha. nice work.

Another well written chapter that says a lot with as little as possible. The part where Hiashi gives Hinata a rare complement for not crying over her mother death is very telling of their relationship. I've been meaning to write a Hinata centric fic for a while now but I just haven't been ready for it, this fic is quite inspiring and gives me some idea's on how to write about what life can be like living at the Hyuga compound; so I thank you for the inspiration. Also I can't believe this was written about 14 years ago? I must have been 8 years old lol. Do you even still check the reviews anymore? Your life must have completely changed since completing this fic.

wow! this was incredibly well written. It was a relatively short chapter but I felt like so much happened. Every sentence served a purpose. I found Hinata's interactions with her mother very interesting and they really displayed their relationship and the dynamics between the main and branch families. I even learned a few new words. 3 nice work. I can already tell you're a talented story teller.

Wow, heartwrenching and beautiful! Great story!