Reviews for Rosemary For Remembrance
DAngel7 chapter 7 . 12/10/2018
Yes, you never stop to surprise me... This wedding for example! It feels like it subtly broke Neji's heart (if I've been reading what I think are the hints for it right).
Now is my NejiHina impossible?
DAngel7 chapter 6 . 12/10/2018
I really marvel at how well you can portray the emotions through a chapter.. This one was a fine example of it, it felt heavy...
DAngel7 chapter 5 . 12/10/2018
I like your twist to the original Naruto storyline.. NaruHina's unsurprising early romance is one of them (but I am still rooting for NejiHina to happen).
I have really strong feelings against cheating, so I found myself secretly wishing Hanabi gets revenge for her mother.. and how symbolic would it be that Nori woman's body to be found in the river on the wild South side (I beg you!) I really would like to see Hiashi's reaction then.
Oh, and I feel like you hinted that Hinata's mother could of been in love with Hizashi but you never confirmed it...
DAngel7 chapter 4 . 12/10/2018
Is it just me or are there subtle hints of Neji's developing feelings for Hinata? When he suddenly stiffened as he saw the obvious display of Hinata's feelings for Naruto...
Also, I do not like Hanabi in your story.. I was so angry at her when she went to her father to rattle Hinata to get her in trouble and make herself look better, instead of just using and showing her skill when she battles her... and the way she talks to Hinata. I don't feel sister love from her...
DAngel7 chapter 3 . 12/9/2018
hmm Hanabi seems a bit cold and manipulative in this story, I think I prefer the cheeky girl who loves her sister, but it's probably needed for this story's plot. I would love to see more of Neji and his interactions with Hinata.
DAngel7 chapter 2 . 12/9/2018
I like that you are somewhat keeping to the original story yet you are creating your own intake on it. I have always been curious to know more about Hyuuga and sadly they never went into their story too much.
I still can't get over your intake on Hiashi and Himiko as loveless relationship (when in the anime/manga I am sure it was hinted the oposite) yet I guess it is necessary for the heavy emotions and set of this story.
DAngel7 chapter 1 . 12/9/2018
The relationship between Hinata's father and mother was very painful to shallow, even though they didn't really have an interaction and was shown through advice and Hinata's view. It was heartbreaking.
I wonder how you'll develop NejiHina and I dearly hope it's won't be as heartbreaking.
softneji chapter 13 . 11/12/2018
stumbled upon this after already reading it more than a year ago, but it still brings me the same joy as the first time i read it. you write so beautifully. this story was so beautifully tragic. thank you.
forgetmenotlovely chapter 13 . 10/17/2018
I really enjoyed this work. The resolution was so satisfying, especially since in previous chapters, things got bad, then exponentially worse. Many great moments, and chapter 12 was especially memorable. Remembering Neji's love for her pushed her to move forward. I found that scene particularly emotional. The poison was an unexpected and awesome plot point. I read the explicit scenes from AO3, and they were some of the best porn with purpose I've ever encountered. The tone of the scenes were just right. Apologies for the disjointed review. I just wanted to let you know how much I loved your work!
TimeturnerJay chapter 13 . 10/9/2018
I am crying. Thank you for giving me this beautiful piece of literary poetry; this is the most breathtaking fanfiction I have read in many years, and I have read many. Every single part was so unfathomably bittersweet. The endless circle of Hyuuga pain and despair is captured on such a personal level.
I am glad that Neji and Hinata finally managed to break away, after all this timeperhaps an echo of what could have been, had Neji not died so young.
Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it, even if it was long ago.
Your work is stunningly beautiful.
AlenDarkStar chapter 13 . 9/26/2018
Great story, i love it.
AlenDarkStar chapter 12 . 9/26/2018
I didn't expect the end, Hinata didn't want believe but her sister is a monster and she must be stopped.
AlenDarkStar chapter 11 . 9/26/2018
I knew, something bad will happening, Hanabi is cruel, she is dangerous, and Naruto, he choose a Sasuke again.
AlenDarkStar chapter 10 . 9/26/2018
Hanabi has a big problem, she is crazy.
AlenDarkStar chapter 9 . 9/26/2018
So tragic, Hinata's baby and Hiashi.
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