Reviews for Rosemary For Remembrance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is wow. I really like the nuances in the narrative, and I like the mirroring of how sight function and the way you write- the gap between the things you see and things you know from that observation, mirroring the things you tell us in the story and the things we deduce from there. I think that was brilliant and really toed the story together with the hyuga theme and Himiko’s. Thanks for sharing this gem |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I don’t think I’ll ever be okay again after reading this. I’m sorry I’m not very good at reviewing but i really just want you to know this is a brilliant story and you’re an amazing writer and thank you so much for sharing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my fucking god I have goosebumps all over! What a way fo go! This is brilliant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. Oh my god. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You didn’t really cut anything out so i’m slightly confised |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gods Hanabi is cruel! I’m completely hooked on this story now damn |
![]() ![]() ![]() This literally hurt to read. You never say neji likes her but you deliver it so beautifully. You’re such a atelnted writer truly and it’s inspiring. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ughhh i can’t get over how much i like this? I’m so intrigued! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok but the idea of Neji having a street fight is just so intriguing. I really loved this chapter— I feel like the little kiss between Hinata and Shino is important for Hinata’s charcater growth. You kind of cemented that she’s not a blushing fainting virgin that can’t look a boy in the eye. Awesome chap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooh that ending. That ending is damn perfect! Will Hanabi be an antagonist in this fic? How will Neji learn to like Hinata? I can’t wait to find out! Amazing work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so heartbreakingly beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been reading fanfiction for over a decade now and your writing style and imagery is some of the best I've ever seen. Please get yourself a publisher, if you haven't already. |
![]() ![]() Loved this story. Finished all the chapters in a few hours. You have a great way of showing the characters personality throughout their lives and how they evolve. Awesome job! |
![]() ![]() Amazing story and writing. One of my absolute favorites, keep it up! |
![]() ![]() It was really great, I really enjoyed reading it :) Hopefully you might write some more NejiHina in the future *fingers crossed* |