|Reviews for Unbreaking|
| Eve chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
I'm really enjoying this and I can't wait to see what happens next! I love how in character they stay, and cliche or not, your writing sets it apart. Thanks for sharing!
| an chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
| sentient chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
Amazing. You're exceptional at making a story unique no matter how played out a scenario is. And now for the most overused reader's cliche (yet, in this case, very appropriate and truthful) - I can't wait for the next chapter.
| sarahbryant chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
I am shocked! Your story is so food. THE best I have EVER seen and I don't say that too often! If you still don't think so, look at how mony reviews you have! This is a wonderful story and I think that you should become a professional author and make money for your work.. WOW!
| werewolfe chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
I love your writing style! Some people try to cram to many words and extra uneeded stuff into their stories, but yours was awesome and interesting on its own. Write more!
| Lasrevinu chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
Super great. I'm on the edge of my seat. This fic really is exhilarating and all of the wonderful details add to the tension. Keep up the great work!
| Pick-A-Wallflower chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
| TrishG chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
Good story. Update soon.
| ScienceGeek chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
That was a shocking segue from Grissom and Sara's conversation, and the aftermath of the car accident. I thought it was very compelling, and left me unsettled for the rest of the story. And I mean that in the most complementary way possible. This may be 'cliche', as you say, but I love the way you're weaving the story. And heck, I'm a sucker for cliche.
| english rose chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
Great start. Can't wait for the next chapter
| torey chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
whoa! Completely blown away by this one, you are incredible at keeping in character, and your use of language is descriptive without sounding ornate. Please upd8 soon!
| rdbeloved chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
Brilliant! Love the beginning. Just keep going and keep torturing Grissom with angst. The man deserves it! Wonderful start!
| CSIcorrespondent chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
Holy Crap! That was incredible! Write more!
| Becca12Ste chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
Wow! that was good. You have my attention. Update soon
| TheBard1 chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
Loved this! Can't wait for more...