Reviews for The Scorpion's Sting
Lamorak Korving chapter 2 . 10/23/2016
Canis Major, also known as Sirius the Dog Star, most likely.
TheSubtleFork chapter 14 . 9/8/2016
Haha, loving the HDM subtle knife reference! Hope to see a couple more of them.
TheSubtleFork chapter 13 . 9/8/2016
sorry no meaningful review, just had to comment 'omg Lyra Parry'. ive just finished another read through of HDM, and you almost had me crying on the train.
pm86 chapter 43 . 8/15/2016
Idk why I'm writing this, 5years or so since the last update; but you have a rather large plothole in your story re:Sirius. There is no way that Harry's character, in any verse, would ever have left Sirius behind for such a long period in your story. It seems like you completely forgot about the character. With the ending of Wormtail, there is no reason to keep Sirius a fugitive. Just some thoughts...
Guest chapter 26 . 6/23/2016
...MN.?..m,
Guest chapter 52 . 3/8/2016
I have really enjoyed this story. hope it gets updated.
Guest chapter 52 . 3/8/2016
Update please. Such a great story ending like this is killing me.
Salamence989 chapter 52 . 1/24/2016
please make more
Ravenfeather11037 chapter 8 . 1/20/2016
Alright, I change my mind. I think the Death Eater is Isabeau.
Ravenfeather11037 chapter 5 . 1/20/2016
Hmmm, I think the Death Eater is either Fleur's mum or Umbridge... More likely Umbridge.
katiek121 chapter 52 . 7/28/2015
I have enjoyed being able to read this. I wish it was complete though.
Guest chapter 50 . 7/5/2015
needs a sequel
OriksGaming chapter 35 . 6/23/2015
Wow... So your Peter Pettigrew is a powerful child molesting creep. Just wow. Lol
Guest chapter 52 . 2/7/2015
I've grown quite fond of this story, I do hope to see it finished!
Saelora chapter 52 . 1/17/2015
I just found your story, and am loving it. But isn't Lyra a mite obvious reference? Especially with the animal... Familiar that goes everywhere with her. Why, if she was a bit younger i'd be wondering why it's not shapeshifting.
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