|Reviews for The Scorpion's Sting|
| CMVreud chapter 26 . 11/21/2013
So it is Morgaines stone.
Wondered what happened with it.
And still do...
| CMVreud chapter 24 . 11/21/2013
I want that morrrrrorrrr!
I WANT THAT MIRRORRRRRR!
| CMVreud chapter 7 . 11/7/2013
Mars is bright tonight again.
| Tomon chapter 52 . 9/3/2013
Well, and so we are at the end of the road. It's really shame it's left unfinished. And in so interesting part. By date is one of the oldest HP&Fleur story I read and it's also on of the best.
You had several interesting idea and I enjoyed your characters and their interaction. So now I can really hope that maybe... someday you will come back and finish your magnificient tale. But even you don't, thank you for all your work
| Tomon chapter 51 . 9/3/2013
Chambers of secret isn't on Marauder's map. They creators obviously never discovered it and even if they're was some doubt. Twins admit that they tried to find Ginny through it and couldn't.
Otherwise interesting how did Voldemort managed to set up all of that. But Roger is an interesting choice.
What I don't know how their enemy can know so much about their link to be able to somehow stop it? Also the bonding could give Fleur some ability to at least ressist Imperio which force her to hurt Harry. While in the end she managed, it was rather late and for both to act without any care of Davis? Well. I hope it will be interesting wherever they resurface :)
| Tomon chapter 50 . 9/3/2013
I just can't bring myself to see Harry admitting it so easily. Hermione is really to nosy and I would put her in her place.
But we also got good news. Cedric is back and he can claim to be striked by Avada Kedavra and live to tell the tale :-D Even if in his case is it thanks to weakening the curse before it struck :)
| Tomon chapter 49 . 9/3/2013
First lovemaking in Avalon, beat that :-D From what I gathered they're in there in fact in their real bodies? If not and they're just dreaming this special dream together, would she stay virgin? :-D Well, that's just on a side note.
Quite on spot in the end with the bed prepared for them. And so this was their reason they needed to wait. Interesting. Quite interesting a good chapter.
| Tomon chapter 48 . 9/3/2013
Don't stay as your animal for long, just don't :-D Good one!
| Tomon chapter 47 . 9/3/2013
Okay, Romilda tried something that is forbidden by their teacher and Harry is not even mad? Eh... Really weird. But whatever, at least he managed to ressist :)
Otherwise good chapter and while I at first thought that the previously mentioned murder of Umbridge could be better, maybe she is in fact happy xD
| Tomon chapter 38 . 9/1/2013
Well, the scheme is rathet obvious. Albus get kissed :-D At least if he won't do anything about it which he just might :-D
Still enjoying every chapter :)
| Tomon chapter 23 . 9/1/2013
Bloody murder! Or rather a disgusting snack? :-D They really planned to ger rid of her for good. Really didn't expect this one.
| Tomon chapter 22 . 9/1/2013
Umbridge animagus... not sure how she managed it but I guess even her can have one accomplishment. So... a toad :-D
Anyway, so far so good! :)
| Tomon chapter 11 . 8/31/2013
Heh, so she won't be teacher but rather immidietly investigator :-D I hope peeves will have a field day with her :-D
| Tomon chapter 10 . 8/31/2013
Some people could be saved from their stupidity but some people have to die so the rest of us are saved from their stupidity... Dumbledore meet two of the later example :-D
So there is a change to not have that Toad teaching, well. It would be good for students but it may take away rather large obstacle for Harry's 5 year... Let's see what you decided
| Tomon chapter 7 . 8/31/2013
So even Voldemort want Fleur in hogwarts! Now it's obvious, the Dark Lord is romantic and can't help himself spreading and helping young love! :-D
Well, I think he may really want to have some leverage against Harry since he again managed to flee but may theory is rather lacking... Nevermind, we're going to find out :)