Reviews for 9:40 PM
BubblyShell22 chapter 4 . 5/5/2013
Wow. An awesome ending to this. At least Alex lived and thanked Don for saving her. That had to be a weight off of Don's mind. And I think all of the scenarios were his fears that he hadn't saved her and what could have happened. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
BubblyShell22 chapter 2 . 5/5/2013
Whoa. This is weird. Don keeps experiencing different scenarios of the same situation. Not good. Awesome job on this. I'm off to read more and to see how this ends.

The Bubbly One,
BubblyShell22 chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Whoa. A very awesome start to this story. Yeah, Don won't likely forget what happened to him for sure. At least he was able to save Alex. Nicely done on this. I'm off to read more.

The Bubbly One,
Michael J Angelo chapter 4 . 11/11/2009
Donnie finally got out of the time paradox thing~ :D If he was in one in the first place. XP;

Anyway, very clever. :D I'm definitely going to read 'Dante's Inferno' now. x3
thehappystalkerball chapter 4 . 5/5/2009
Wow, that was intense. That would be so freaky to keep reliving something awful over and over again. Anyway, great story! Glad that it all worked out in the end, though.
Ozlex chapter 4 . 6/27/2008
Really interesting story. Worst Groundhog day EVER I would have to say... poor Donatello. Anyway have you seen the movie "2:37" I think you would really like it slightly similar (In a way) to this story :) :D
Muria chapter 4 . 4/14/2008
Wow... What a plot. Normally, the repeat-a-moment plot doesn't result from a dream, but I like that twist. And, poor Don kept trying so hard, even though he got it right the first time!

I felt so sorry for Don and Alex in this until the end. There was enough closure there.

Alex is a very likeable, and reasonable, OC.

The Inferno was a nice touch. I actually read that earlier this year for English and really enjoyed it. It fits your story well.
Tatsumaki-sama chapter 4 . 3/5/2008
Poor Donnie! Reliving Alex's death over and over again. I absolutely loved this ingenious plot of yours and how Don kept going through the loop until he finally solved his little predicament. Your portrayal of Donnie, just simply this whole story was written wonderfully. Great job!
Ladyofthebookworms chapter 4 . 8/16/2007
Then is this the first circle? Or the first four?
Deana chapter 4 . 7/6/2006
This is a really cool story! :)
Shadowflame611 chapter 4 . 12/17/2005
Wow... what an interesting story that you have here. The plot is different, and very creative. That coupled with your writing skills sucked me right in to the story. :-)

Hee hee... I was wondering how the heck Donnie was going to get out of this- if ever. I first thought that something similar was happening to him to what the Foot Mystics had done to the four turtles in one of the episodes of this season. I can't remember the name of the eppie, just that they attacked Splinter and his sons while they were meditating...

Anyways, I think that I'll be favoriting this story. :-) Excellent job; I loved it!

Aaron Smiley chapter 4 . 12/17/2005
Wowee..great story...interesting thoughts.

Reminded me of that movie Ground hog day only not so funny, glad everything finally worked out for poor Don, I was beginning to wonder if you were just going to leave him going around in that circle of events forever...I'm still confused about some parts, like why it happened over and over and how, but maybe that's not meant to be answered and I was alittle confused on what happened during the last battle, but I really enjoyed reading it.

Great job and congrats on the Fna fic nomination!

Jessiy Landroz chapter 4 . 12/17/2005
okay, this story so totally freaked me out at start, but shell! this is awsome! confused me a shell lot but still buttkickin' awsome! :D

poor Donny, you did a good job doing him here, he was so confused, *weren't we all* and I guess Alex is doing fine all thanks to out hero in purple, eh? :3
Goddess of Idun chapter 4 . 11/13/2005
good story. poor don, i would totally freak if that happened to me.
Sabishiioni chapter 4 . 3/3/2005
Cool story! I was starting to gert pretty frustrated too!

Now on to the reason for the review. It is so nice to actually "meet" someone who has read Dante's Inferno! No one I talk to even has a clue what I'm talking about when I mention it! Awesome book! (I'm actually working on a story based on it.)

Great job on a wonderful story!
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