Reviews for The MarySue
hollyleaf1122 chapter 7 . 1/12/2016
This story never fails to make me laugh. I live for sassy Ponyboy. And Johnny had some of the best lines in the story I swear! I wish you could update it someday. It's alright if you don't want to though.
coke-river chapter 7 . 7/7/2014
oh gosh. its been what? 8 years since you last updated this story? so its definitely abandoned. idek if you'll read this. although its pretty great because people like me are still reading your story. i think you're my new favorite person. ever. i hate most mary sue stories. they're all honestly the same. bUT THIS IS GREAT BECAUSE IT MANAGES TO OFFEND SO MANY WRITERS ON THIS SOMETIMES VERY STUPID SITE. yeah well they deserved it.
MilliniumLint chapter 7 . 2/1/2014
Whoa that chapter was long but still funny
MilliniumLint chapter 6 . 2/1/2014
OMG this is crazy but funny will the guys ever see since
MilliniumLint chapter 5 . 2/1/2014
OMG laughed so hard when Curly randomly appeared
MilliniumLint chapter 4 . 2/1/2014
OMG poor Johnny he can't be under her spell to
MilliniumLint chapter 3 . 2/1/2014
OMG Soda is starting to scare me
MilliniumLint chapter 2 . 1/30/2014
OMG this story is hilarious!
MilliniumLint chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
This is hysterical. I actually busted out laughing at the part when everyone happened to be in the car.
pinksugarrush chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
Omgish ahahaha!

This made me laugh so hard! I just loved how she was moving in slow motion! And, wait for it! Her hair moving in a round about way with no wind! Hahaha.

And then there was that funny touch of her becoming class president. That made me fall out of my chair. How typical.

I really love the part with Darry calling and saying that everybody was in the car! Even the mailman. Like what the eff? Haha.

Love it! Keep up the good work!
AnimeKitten47 chapter 7 . 12/6/2012
You dissed my country!
3: … 3: ...wah?...
I'm going to pretend to be angry now, because other countries say that is the American way! Grrrr!
Nah... I'd rather go read something else, 'cus I'm too lazy to be falsely angry...
Other than DISSING MY COUNTRY, I really like this story... Where'd you go? Need chapter! NEED!
Kurokage-chan chapter 7 . 11/13/2012
(sorry, too lazy to log in)
This story manages to get on my nerves, and make me laugh at the same time! Please continue! And yes, you don't f- with the Hero, because when he was still a Chibi, he could swing around a buffalo like it was one of Greece's cats, and then he beat up Iggy! If you don't get it, I'm so sorry for being strange :P
StayGold4ever chapter 7 . 7/7/2012
Omg dying of laughter! Totally, completely hilarrious, sickeningly sentimental and sweet, and horrifyingly Mary-Sueish! I was cracking up the whole time! Especially at:

"Thank god, you're home! It's late and I've been worried sick!" He yelled frantic, tears streaming down his face, and bald patches were visible on his head, from obvious worry.

"Set your soul free!"

"They stepped on my Happy Meal!"

I love how everyone randomly burst into tears over the slightest movement! And how she suddenly and randomly moves in with them! You're, like, the master of writing and comedy! Lol. Continue this, please! ;)
pepsi-Cola.StayGoldPony chapter 7 . 7/16/2010
lol. I think pony and vesna should get together! XD
SodapopXPonyboylover chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Hoooooollllllyyyy crap this is hillarious. I was dying about the part with the mailman. I was literally doubled over.
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