Reviews for Fallen to Ashes
VanyaNoldo22 chapter 1 . 1/20
I think my heart just broke into a thousand pieces... I've always admired Feanor and his sons. But the Oath they made has destroyed their family.
Lady Amber chapter 1 . 3/1/2016
Oh my goodness. This is so terribly sad and amazing at the same time! I love it. Great job! :)
Ellethiriel chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
This was so tragic and beautiful and amazing... I nearly cried.

I love it.
Salome Maranya chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
Oh Eru, that was just depressing. I think you did well with Maglor's thoughts- he would probably have despised their actions but they were simply doomed whatever happens. No matter how you delay the fall, if you are fated to, you will fall.
Nice work, I liked your other stories as well.
BookWorm624 chapter 1 . 5/4/2014

So sad and such a beautiful snap shot here! I often wondered what possessed Fëanor to wage war and murder over a bunch of stones and metal and then bring his 7 children into the mess! Surely the lives of 7 precious sons should be worth more than a couple of jewels!
Sobhan chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
VioTanequil chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Wow. I think you managed to perfectly capture the heartbreak and tragedy of the Sons of Feanor in this fic. Maglor was the perfect choice of eyes to view this incident through.

Thank you for the wonderful fic.
Duilin chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
I think this captures childhood Celegorm, and Celegorm when he is an adult. Maglor, of course, is the BEST.
Emily chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
How sad. I almost cried. : (
amebane chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
I liked your story. I think the brothers were the tragic figures of the First Age. They followed their Father into hell.
asdfjkl chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
that made me cry!
Jimmy Candlestick chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
that was awesome...
Fili chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
So wonderful, I loved it! I'm in a terrible hurry right now and can't make this long, but wanted to let you know that this was very strong, and beautiful, and sad. Lovely...

LadyEledhwen chapter 1 . 6/15/2006
This story really made me weep... I cant express how much this touched me... I saw the scene very vividly in my mind... I loved the part where Maglor remembers how the usually cold Celegorm hugged him as he cradles him in his arms... it reminded me of my own brother... my eyes really got teary there. But then there was Celegorms request for a song... and his terror as he clinges for his older brother as he breathes out his life... Maglor who can do nothing for him except of trying him to give comfort before his inescapable end... I am really lost for words.

"The light in the silver eyes faded. “Maka…” "

I really wept with Maglor at this point...

Brilliantly written...
Depprium chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
What an excellent piece of writing. Celegorm crying out for Maglor as he is dying is really heartwrenching and haunting- he will have no piece in death, instead his fate is to be damned to the Everlasting Darkness.
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