Very nice. I love the sharp words you use. Great job at converying emotion with simpistic language. Also love how the poem falls down the page. Beautiful.

its cool and sad

I liked it but what does it have to do with gundam? Keep writing, also the picture didn't show up

this could go with the personality of quatre... fallen angel thing...

see! look what you DID! You've insored me to write an entire Fallen Angell Quatre series! AHHHH

Sorry... *SweatdroP*

That is a very good poem. It has a clear structure and you use words well without using many. How do I see the picture?

Author's note: I know that the picture isn't showing up, but is being anal about uploading the story and I have very little patience. So anyway, if you want to see the picture, it is also at .