Interesting concept. Well written so far.

Really loved your stories, I’m probably not seeing your Forever Knight story. Could you direct (link) me to it?

Hi, Fine story this is, but found a typo or possible mistake: "... give my? your personal ... ", should my be me or possibly" my staff" -wording missing ?

Thanks, love series btw... any possibility for future stories to timeline ?

WBR,
Bigpanda74

You know of course that part of this chapter is missing. It stops right after "The old Jaffa slapped his former pupil on the shoulder.

Its a pity I didnt read this story first. I read the Stargate Murders first and that is the SEQUEL to this story, but both stories are very well written. I thoroughly enjoyed reading them.

I love your suicide team characters - especially Gabriel Fuentes and Annie Yates.

Wonderful story. Intense. Couldn't stop reading it. Loved the cross-overs. Beautifully written. Keep on writing!

From the first chapter to the last your story just sweep the reader away your central characters personalises come to live which let the reader relate to them you become interested in what is happening to them they become and they become almost real to you which is the mark of a very good story teller. Thank you for your hard work

This was a lot of fun to read. The SG and JAG parts were really well done, and I could see them as episodes. The West Wing stuff really didn't work as well for me, but that is probably due to the fact I never really cared for the show.

Saw this on a list. Its an interesting mixup of characters so far. Great work making Gave and Annie real people.

An amazing fic. Wow. Thanks for writing it!

Wow. First of all, wow. This was really, really good. I love Gabriel, Josie is charming, and Chun-li is fabulous in so many many ways that I can't even list them all.

It had never really occured to me that some commanders could easily see a need for a suicide team to be sent through the stargate. Once you pointed it out, though, it was perfect. And I particularly liked the growth you showed in Colonel Kennedy because he starts out as such a bad guy but in the end you realize that he's still ruthless and somewhat cold, but he has good intentions, patriotism, and his own version of loyalty to his men.

At first when you started making the majority of our convicts actually innocent it struck me as too coincidental but the more I thought about it the more it made sense. Of all the convicts Kennedy had access too, he picked the very best and brightest. The ones who could potentially survive 25 suicide missions. They're the ones who are really the least likely to have done the crimes, or at least be caught for the crimes, that they were charged with.

This was, over all, a fabulous story. Thank you for posting it. I'm now off to check on what else you've written.

I really liked this story, but you have a problem with it. You're missing a part between posted chapters ten and eleven. I'm hoping it's just an accident, and you can go back and correct the posting since the story shouldn't have jumped from the the arrival of Master Bra'tec to post-Honeymoon with Gabe and Daisy. IF you made that choice to deliberately do that with the story, may I suggest that you go back and write the missing chapter because what you've done isn't fair to your readers. You've setup several *major* things that are in that missing chapter, and it's cheating your readers to not pay off on the setup. And just on a scheduling note within the missing chapter. Doesn't Josie know at this point what goes on in the mountain? If so, whomever came up with the idea that Josie should be doing her last run through for her concert at exactly the same time her *Uncle Daniel* is getting a medal, should be shot. She would be so absolutely proud of him. And even if she doesn't know, with Daisy and Gabe having parts in the concert too, that means they'd have to be up-top with the orchestra for the run through, and they wouldn't be there to witness Daniel getting his medal either. Other than these issues, I *loved* this story, and it's been saved to my hard drive for conversion into an ebook so I can reread it on my PDA. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters on more stories sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

Great read! Enjoyed every word. Single comment - you have some oversized paragraphs that you might want to condider breaking down. It would make the story easier to read.

I was very surprised by this story. I came in with low expectations and finished it singing your praises. You are an excellent author and I highly reccomend this story to anyone.

Keep up the good work and I can't wait for more of thier adventures.

I have to say Crossover is a rather tricky method,which explains not many people appreciate it.