Reviews for Into La Ment |
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![]() ![]() that's a sick ending the story wasn't that great |
![]() ![]() ![]() BRAVA! Totally awesome! I'm printing this and putting it in my folder of cool Phantom PhanPhics! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HA HA! I Love It ! "The Phantom of the Opera is here" Perfect! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it so far. One thing though...You use the word "too" instead of "to". Just saying. Also, YEA FOR PESSIMISM! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very good story, up until the point where you ended it. It doesn't seem finished, and I want more. :( It's a bad feeling. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what does libidinous mean? m.d.c |
![]() ![]() ![]() the word would be heartwrenching, not heartrending, because that would change the meaning of the sentence. i think. im just a boffin. oh, and it murderer, not murder. check it. otherwise...I LIKE IT... Mazangerine de chagny |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yah...has meg gone barmy? no offence, but this chapter makes no sense. Hey, that rhymes! M.D.C. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it! Hey,you've obviously done some research for this. lickily, no one has yet criticised my story for lack of historical credebility. I other words, i didn't research anything. I like your story. MegxErik parings are way cool. I hate to dissapoint you with your 'i want pessimisn, i hate romance, death is the best thing in the world' fest, but i think your story's v. good. Mazangerine de chagny. p.s. pls read my story, as I lack reviews! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK, that was gross. Gross, but a much better ending than our beloved Erik dying at the hands of the Surete. Watch the errors...The romance was good...The gore was realistic...Well developed characters...I liked Fournier in a sad sort of way...Aside from the picky things, a capital tale. I look forward to Fears Within a Dream. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cheers to you. I like the ending of this one. I'm finishing right now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Errors? Yes. Barfing? Fine, fine. Erik? Let there be rejoicing, for he has seen the error of his ways. Enlighten me. What does o.O mean? |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK, a few picky things because I love you. Stop mixing up your to's and too's, your who's and whom's. It makes me cry to read stuff that has such good plot and...well, that's so good when the spelling is off-I love good spelling. Reread, get a beta (could be me, if you like), whatever it takes. It would turn an amazing story into a perfect one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm working on it. I'm starting with this one-is there an order? I like the...I don't know. I like it. Watch for spelling, though-Meg keeps bushes on her table. CUL8R |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite enjoyable! I look forward to another chapter. |