Reviews for Take My Heart Away |
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![]() ![]() literally crying my eyes out because of the last 2 chapters whyyy author whyyyyyy TT Such as beautiful journey tho, lookig forward to checking out your other books and hoping for some more fluff and HEA |
![]() ![]() Terribly sad. I expected a happy ending of Tom and Hermione. |
![]() ![]() It's mind-blowing |
![]() ![]() Dear Hatusu, I'm a big fan of HP and tomione from China.I like your article very is my conviction that if the article can be translated to Chinese, much more people in China will be able to enjoy and share your wonderful such, I am hoping that you can grant me permission to translate this article to Chinese. Thank you very much in advance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn… i did not expect that ending lol. thanks for sharing this wonderful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I noticed a mistake. Instead of 'goforward' it should be 'go forward'. If you have a beta reader, I recommend you reread this fanfic with your beta reader. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was fascinating to read. Love well planned stories. Thank you for sharing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was such a beautiful story. the chain link and time travel made so much sense. I'm not really religious but I believe that you cannot change time. even if magic were real, everything plays out a certain way. we all have choices, but the choices will take us somewhere. if we don't know where we want to go, just let life unfold. i fell in love with this story over and over again. i cried, laughed, and blushed whilst reading this. it truly isn't the end, because as the title states, its just the beginning. maybe they'll be together past the veil, in heaven. maybe their bodies will be twisted together even in death. maybe they'll share a coffin as no one could separate them, who knows. but one things for sure; the adventure isn't over for them - or us. this will forever hold a place in my heart. - LovinqRosiie 1/19/2021 [nearly 16 years later] |
![]() ![]() I'm sobbing... Omg this is such an amazing story... I started feeling bad for whatever pain riddle had gone through almost forgetting that i had hated Rowling's Voldemort with vengeance.. This story is beyond beautiful.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() even in his death the rose had not wilted OMG SUCH A GOOD STORY BEAUTIFUL i wish there was more stuff ab then being in love like hanging out togther but they way u did it was perfect anywyas amazing writer and story i love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES DESTINY ALTERS THE CHOICES WE MAKE I DONT EXCATLY AGREE 100% BUT YES I WAS TRYING TO EXPLAIN THEY R CONNECTED ITS NOT WHAT CHOICES WE CHOOSE OR WHAT DESTINY WILL INEVITABLY HAPPEN THEY FIT TOGTHER (plus the fact they’re other reality were different choices happened and go thru different lives) |
![]() ![]() ![]() im so confused like since the beginning y she time traveled right before being killed by voldy and not like behind a wall or smt |
![]() ![]() ![]() ik those bad feelings. OMG THE give this world a chance even tho it has not given u one ND u will not turn ur back on those who have turned their backs on u brilliant writing my gosh i loveeee that paragraph felt felt felt omg |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah i’m tearing up |