Reviews for I Got You
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15
This could be the interesting, but it needs proofreading.
anon chapter 1 . 9/13/2017
You seem to use 'that' a lot. Minimizing that would be one of moves a beta ought to make. Do you need one?
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2016
Your bio is pretty harsh on writers, but your story is full of run-on sentences and sentence fragments.

"If you're going to write a story and publish it on a public site, expect to be criticized if your grammar, spelling, etc. is bad. "
Firey Phoenix01 chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
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guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
I really don't know what I was thinking as I started to read this story. It shows that you're a first time writer and I would like to see you try better next time you write something
Get a life chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
Fuck you cow shit.

Go fuck a moose you stupid ass slut.

And then die in a hole bitch
Blah chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
The most gayest shit ever.

Fuck you, whore
taintedbutterflypotterfan chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
aw thats so sweet:)
HollieGolightly chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
hi! i like the way you didnt go for the usual way that draco falls in love with hermione, the whole it-just-hit-me-in-the-head-thing, you actually showed his turning point in a different way. keep writing,

chibi angelle chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
poisonrain chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
oh wow! this was your first time? It's really really good; I was trying not to cry the whole time, but i ended up tearing a little at the end anyway ]

i really liked how you kept them in character, and not having draco go all soft, and having him still kinda resent harry..

Anyway, I really really liked this.
Sakura chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
So cute! Who knew Draco had feelings?
Tokio-Panic134 chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
HPobsession chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
loved it, sweet and short.

with love,