Reviews for Lost To Find
annie200 chapter 7 . 1/29/2006
I liked the idea of Max feeling guilty about Zack, and specifically the reason why she felt guilty. I've never thought of it before, but it makes sense.

Enjoying this.
DA Bob chapter 7 . 1/29/2006
Very smart, that is something that would kinda trigger that annoying guilty voice. Don't think this dynamic has been thought of before. Poor Max, having to learn to live with that. Totally sucks.

I liked that they were making out in the woods:

"So what if they were making out in the middle of the forest crawling with transgenic escapees. They were making out."

My sentiments exactly!
Maria656 chapter 7 . 1/29/2006
for 6 & 7

Very well written-esp. the escape

also enjoyed the homecoming in chap 7

looking forward to more
Babyangel86 chapter 7 . 1/29/2006
Story is excellent never stop...

there are so many questions i wanna ask...

i wrote a really long review b4, but screwed it up in transmission... but the stry is good...

love the andgs that fluff the uncertainty... everything...

excellent job, keeo up the wwesome work... :-)
idlehands452 chapter 6 . 12/29/2005
i liked it. i think you did an awesome job on this chapter. i'm not too cool with the chapter bribe thing though. hope to see more soon. keep up the great work.
idlehands452 chapter 6 . 12/29/2005
i liked it. i think you did an awesome job on this chapter. i'm not too cool with the chapter bribe thing though. hope to see more soon. keep up the great work.
Mari83 chapter 6 . 12/27/2005
Really good chapters!

Like how the X5s take over Logan’s apartment and how you make each of them individual with the detailed descriptions.

The same goes for the description of Max in Manticore , especially her thoughts on Ben, and her guilt at betraying Logan.

Like your characterization of Alec with his trial to stay away from any form of trouble and commitment and cover it with an arrogant attitude.

The Logan part was just right (And honestly, there can’t be enough Logan ever;-) with his frustration at “just” sitting in front of the computers.

The part with Manticore going down was really well done with the different views (liked the little X7), the descriptions of the chaos all over and the rescuing of Max.

Don’t like the review thing, though. And what happens to chapter 7, if enough people review? I’d like to read that, too.
BlueAngel137 chapter 6 . 12/26/2005
Awesome work again!

I really don't think you overdid the Logan part. Only thing I'm not so sure about is Renfro. I mean she doesn't seem to be the "easy dying" type of person. ;-) But hey, for all I care she can roast in hell ... with her "nice" dreams of Manticore. :)

Loved the action scenes - very well written.

Hope you update soon.

THANKS.
Babyangel86 chapter 6 . 12/25/2005
wat do u mean over did the logan part... we barely even got any in my opinion...

lovely stuff... dont u dare make me wait till 10... that would just be cruel... i'l update ten times if u like... but please... dont...

love this story... awesome stuff... :-)

update soon.
Cody199 chapter 6 . 12/25/2005
I like the action in the story.
Babyangel86 chapter 5 . 12/22/2005
excellent stuff...

oh... max betrayed Logan... can imagine the pain she would have gone through...

i really hope Logan's not in the building... that would kinda suck...

definitely update soon...
Guest chapter 5 . 12/20/2005
this is a terrific story-so exciting! Please write more!

gd10
BlueAngel137 chapter 5 . 12/20/2005
Another excellent chapter and hey, a really fast update! Can't wait for more.

THANKS.
All Grown Up chapter 5 . 12/19/2005
wow, this is great! really enjoying it. it's a fresh spin on something that tends to be overdone. i particularly enjoyed:

"I broke in one day, he pointed a nice big gun at me and thanked god I was a cat burglar. Funny how things work out."

good description of psy ops too. please update more soon!
Maria656 chapter 5 . 12/19/2005
good chap-like how you are developing this
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