I like the way you have worked them into each others lives with the joining spell. I'm sure this will be a turning point in the stereotypical way they view each other. Good Job! Definitely in this one now. Thanks for all the hard work.

A wonderful fic. Loved reading it. If only the whole riley thing ended like this.

Wow. I know that's not nearly enough to describe it but... wow is the only word that comes to mind right now. Wow. Just wow. x

hi my names cassie and it is soo weird to keep reading the name cass and i think it would be less weird to read the name cassie...well i just thought i'd let ya know that...ok bye

It's 4:20am and I just finished reading your wonderful story - I really enjoyed it. It was such a good blend of your 2 new characters, the original series, and your own story.

One suggestion, maybe just a little more exploration and background on the joining ritual since it was such an important element. I sure hope that you have more work planned - and that if you are going to do a series that you bring out chapters on a regular basis - Thanks for the wonderful story -

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Just started reading this piece - great start, good blend of using series history and introduction of your other characters. The picture burning work as a set-up for future plot lines. On to more reading.

It's bloody brilliant! I've read the whole thing and I really love it! The emotions, confusion and everything just seems real! Keep going! Hoping for a sequel soon!

I'd forgotten that this was a series, but this was a good spot to pause.

You really built up the curiosity for the thing Dawn, Cass, and Daniel are fighting. Looking forward to the big action.

Did my review of the last chapter not make it, again? This site keeps doing that to me, and it's really annoying. Anyway, I really liked the break-up scene. It was good to see maturity and growth out of both of them.

Later! :)

I'm glad that RL calmed down enough for you to let your muse loose! Ta, sweets. These chappies were excellent. I look forward to more!

you know what? i'm glad you ended buffy and riley's relationship on good terms. i enjoyed the way you wrote it out. and the ending sequence of the chapter. beautiful. i love this story. please update soon. :)

Great work being in Buffy's head.

Thanks.

ek! no stopping! stopping is bad. updating is good. updating frequently is better. so, please update soon, and i'll be very happy. :)

Oh, sweets, that was great! Although, you do know that was completely evil not to mention cruel, the way you left us hanging like that. But, very much worth it.

WHA!

o.O

What d'you mean, she "knows"! Does she really? Or is it just that she didn't intrepret it in the good sense? HUH? ...Did she see his feelings, what with that connection thingy? Damn... Go to write now. NOW.

Oh and I loved this chapter. Really loved it. One of my favorites so far :D! *singsong voice* Riley is an ass-hole! *satisfied grin* No, really, loved the Spike/Riley encounter (Riley/spike... Ugh. UGH.) and een more appreciated the Buffy/spike one. So yeah, good job!

- YB

wow, she took that so much better here than in the show. i like this one more. actually, the way you've completely changed everything from the end of season four on, while still allowing it to make sense is pretty cool. and hey, shirtless spike is always a big bonus.

please update soon. this story still rocks! :D