|Reviews for Inevitable|
| Annastasia Cooper chapter 15 . 9/14/2013
this story was one of the reasons why I got to this website...
It is till one of the best I've ever read...you've even inspired me to an own story...
Thank you so much for uploading this one and share this epicness with us.
I would appreciate it, if you continue it
| BookLover chapter 15 . 4/7/2013
My word, you sir, have a talent! It has been too long since a story line has grasped my mind in such a way! I know it may have been a while since you wrote this, but I ask of you please consider continuing this amazing story!
| bumble-beeoncrack chapter 15 . 2/18/2013
I am totally loving this story! I can't wait to read more! Keep up the great work!
| SharpestSatire chapter 15 . 10/11/2012
Last updated in 09. *mutters to self* Great.
I suppose there's no way you can finish this story...? I know you've probably moved on but I - and others, I'm sure - would like to see the end.
| RoughIslandSunrise chapter 15 . 8/17/2012
Lol what happened with the third dose of potion
| funnygirl chapter 4 . 6/20/2012
It's scary to find out who your soulmate is. I think I would prefer not to know.
| funnygirl chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
I sense great talent here.
| fridajosefin chapter 15 . 5/8/2012
I liked this story a lot. It's a good plot, nicely written! I do, however, wish you wouldn't have finished it so fast.. It all felt kind of like you got bored with writing it, just trying to finish it off as soon as you could.
You are an amazing author though, I look forward to reading more of your work!
| Fearless miko chapter 6 . 3/7/2012
Chapter 6: I think I'm going to draw a picture of Hermione standing in the hallway clutching a potions vial to her heart and blushing in tribute to this story. That description is so rapt and perfect, I can see it in my head, though I doubt my artistic abilities have the talent to capture half the beauty you've managed to describe with words.
I'm to the part where Trelawney compare their hair. Truly an astonishing connection and brilliant! When she says it's a premonition, I get the feeling that Hermione WILL have the brew the potion again, but this time for Snape! Oh, a girl can dream!
I get Hermione's anger at Parvati but I hope she doesn't lash out too badly; I feel like she's going to need support from those girls when she has her first fight with Snape and they're are the onto 2 people who will understand, who she can talk to about it.
Now I'm to the part where she reads his letter and I suddenly find his disagreeable manner adorable and romantic! Off to bed now, will read more tomorrow!
| Fearless miko chapter 5 . 3/7/2012
Chapter 5: Just like Snape to do something helpful disguised as insult to injury. Hopefully Hermione will be able to see beyond the venom.
Haha, 'light their eyebrows on fire.' And the tension between Snape and her in class is so funny, all the other students looking away as soon as he looks at them.
At the end of this chapter, I'm hoping that Snape has a similar revelation, some after affect of the potion maybe or a give away. I want to see his shocked reaction!
| Fearless miko chapter 4 . 3/7/2012
Chapter 4: I feel like you have Lavender and Parvati totally pegged. Their dramatic exclamations, squealing, their vanity, the tacky and loud decorations like all the pink and white flowers on the book, "Pausing to think with a finger on her lip- really, who does that?" ROFL! But it's also endearing in a way and I find myself growing to like those two more and more with each new line, I feel like I'm getting to know them.
Oh, they're dragging her to see Snape and I cannot contain my excitement! Love them even more now. You go, girls, drag her away!
Literally got a chill when I read "hone her into...a Potions Mistress."
| Fearless miko chapter 3 . 3/7/2012
Chapter 3: Very amused by the 'hawkish' stalking Parvati and Lavender are doing to Hermione and her subsequent theory that they're trying to poison her, lmao!
And Lavender would TOTALLY paint her nails that color, you are a genius! I will say the part where she announces that Snape must be the soulmate in question has me worried and thinking about what harm those 2 girls could do with that kind of information.
The description of the potion provides a warm mental image. Dark red has always been my favorite color after all, ever since Jessica Rabbit in that dress and Geri Halliwell later in one similar. ( I am actually a girl, believe it or not! )
I'm reminded of the cinnamon challenge as she drinks it.
| Fearless miko chapter 2 . 3/7/2012
On chapter 2 now : Love the exchange between Parvati and Lavender on the tea grounds Hermione left behind. Makes you wonder if maybe they're more interested in Hermione than they put on.
Also love how 'a chill' is used to describe the entrance of the Potion Master. Casts such a dark feel to him, you can practically see him stalking into the room, hear his robes flutter as he pulls them behind himself dramatically.
| Fearless miko chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
I knew from the first line of this story it was going to be a good one. I love the feeling of tucking into an obviously well rounded plot.
I'm more than half way through the first chapter now and already I'm dying for Hermione to decide to brew the potion. I fantasize that Snap catches her in the act, oh, the drama! :D
Mmmm, cinnamon cream pie. I've never had such a thing but it sounds amazing. Impressive that you were able to come up with yummy-sounding food item that also happened to possess ingredients that tie back into the introduction.
| Kimco96 chapter 15 . 12/29/2011
Nice ;) plz continue!