Reviews for The Renewal Tobias's Story
JDorsey314 chapter 6 . 11/10/2014
Another good story by you. only the second one I've read, but still, it's enough to Identify a pattern: you write interesting fanfics. the no dialogue thing was unique/weird, therefore/however I liked it. and it made the book narrated by rachel make more sense. although this animorphs universe with Tobias's apparaent death is a little odd and I don't see how it fits in with the original series, it's interesting. and I intend to check and see if you have written anymore, and read them if you have!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
pretty good
OreiusCentaur chapter 6 . 2/7/2010
Wow...wow...whoa..this story is SO amazeing to me.I play as Tobias so much and this story made me sad knowing he gave up his hawk body.

10 out of 10 stars for this WONDERFUL story.
Elwing chapter 2 . 2/8/2005
Good explanatory stuff, and you explained all the important things. However, I feel that you should have made both chapters one chapter, because they're both prologue-like, chapters before the chapter in which you finally get to the story that takes place five years ago. That's just a suggestion; you may not want to make your chapters so extremely long.
SilverHawk 27 chapter 2 . 1/29/2005
OH! very deep. i like
SilverHawk 27 chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
o. cool
Asian Angel chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
Great! i like how u portray him...continue soona dn with your other story too.