Reviews for Lazy Saturday Mornings
GirlquinndreameR chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
I adore this story! Of course, I am wondering what business Itachi had at the house. Oh, and it cements the fact that he's not a bloodthristy maniac. He doesn't kill for sport; he kills if he needs to, right?

Anyway, I also liked the ending. It was perfect! Sasuke was so traumatized that anyone touching his forehead would give him a shaky reaction.
o.o chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
-grins- maybe itachi came back to warn sasuke about the kisho and his little brother afraid that history might repeat itself XD!
Kimna chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
Wow, reading one shots once in a can be great- no waiting in agony for next chapters and stuff. But the fact that the story has to be good for you to enjoy, applies all the time. And this one was wonderful! Itachi still has that air of mystery around him, and Kisho sounds so cute. :3 I like how you ended it, haha, with the poke. Fluffy-goodness, great job. :D
Kuraiko chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
this is pretty funny and cute.

I love the idea of Itachi going to visit his nephew, just so adorable~
Kesshin chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
I don't think this is an "uninspired piece" at all. On the contrary, most other authors that try to portray what Sasuke's children could possibly be like do so in ways that make me shudder. *grumbles* Stupid Mary sues...

Anyway, nice job again, my friend. The ending was funny.

serene-revival chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
It's a sweet little piece, but figuring out what Itachi would have wanted from Sasuke (in such a blatant manner to boot) is killing me.

Green eyes? Well.. hopefully eye colour doesn't affect Sharingan. P
esther chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
it's a shame you're disappointed with this one, 'coz i LOVED it.

i haven't read enough drabbly fics where itachi is the mysterious stranger...with a hidden menace lurking behind...

Cueil chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
very nice... it did cut off, but it was interesting.
viviannnnn chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
Omgoodness! What a great story. One-shot, I believe? I really liked how you planned it out. It was great!
ShikamaruRocks chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
This was a really interesting little chapter. I love all of your fics. because you use good word choice. Some people always say the same thing over and over when they write but you use great diversity, I love it. Also, you write really cool things when you have writer's block. I myself am experiencing some of that myself right now, so I know how frustrating it can be. Keep up the good work.
sharpie ink chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
Wow. This was a nice little piece. I think how you ended it was cool too. Poor Sasuke. I think he would have had a heart attack. Though I think the last line was not needed. Just my opinion. I do wonder what Itachi wanted though.
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