Reviews for College Rule Pikario: The Very Old Door Thingy!
Luigi4160 chapter 10 . 2/9/2012
Great fanfiction, very funny throughout the whole thing.
LordLuffy07 of the Merry Go chapter 2 . 11/24/2010
decided to re-read this old work of epicness. Now i do believe I shall go replay the game :) :)
Ittybit chapter 2 . 2/10/2010
Im REALLY glad someone finally noticed that she was a girl...not that anyone reads dialouge anyway no matter how much itll help you in the story...

Anyway thanks to U i need new underwear...

pennington chapter 7 . 12/19/2006
nld200xy chapter 6 . 11/23/2006
I loved this chapter! Also, Cortez's lines were only funnier when I read the translations. Since I haven't taken Spanish in 2 years, I've forgotten it. The only one I understood was Flavio's line, so I didn't need the translation to laugh because I already knew he was saying some nonsense about his pants eating.
nld200xy chapter 5 . 11/22/2006
Wow, so Vivian's a guy in the Japanese version. Damn, she's so cute, too. She's, like, my favorite character. She's the only ally I every used after getting her... or him. Ah well, great job. I can't believe I went this long not reading this fic. It's great like all of your parodies!
Winds 0f Change chapter 1 . 7/2/2006

No, not really :D great story, took me forever to read but I was laughing my bloody head off, watching it roll on the floor, then attempting to laugh harder.

:D awsome deffinately on my favs.
LeonKennedyIsSOFINGAWESOM93 chapter 10 . 6/24/2006
OK! this should be my last review for this story (SNIFF) But i just had to say a few more things to say...(SNIFF)

you mean CRP is over! like a new College Rule Pikario won't be on Fanfiction anymore? or is it just the story that's done and over with?

, The Great Chicken Miasama, let me get this straight.

Pikario is a sex freak/

Vivian is a bisexual/transexual/

Peach is acting like a two-year old/ Is that it?

Have fun writing any other stories you can come up with _
The Great Yoshi Rider chapter 10 . 2/11/2006
Hey hey! I was wondering if I could use Pikario or Chuigi in my fic as a cameo. If I can please reply as soon as possible!
LeonKennedyisSOFINGAWSOME93 chapter 10 . 12/31/2005
AW its over,it Was VERY funny by the way,

EVEN THOUGH i still i have a disturbing Mental image of

GoomBella/Pikella being pregnant its weird though how it went all the way until the end chapter for her water to now i will never be able to look at GoomBella/Pikella when i play Paper Mario: TTYD the same way again ANYWHO here are some of the things and sentences i liked while reading this.



Glitzville Shitzville

2."Hell no, i want to WATCH that guy rip balls off, not lose mine.

3. At time, Squirt decided to let one rip! His fart was so loud, that it convinced Grubba to make an assumption!

Sorry i couldn't writemore but let me tell you this I LOVED EVERYTHING FROM CHAPTER 2 TO THE SECOND TO LAST CHAPTER. Congrats you made this mario fan happy, wish i could've seen the first CRP parody for the first game if 'ou wrote it already AW DAMN F*ING SH*T

MOTHA F*A I PEED MY SELF FROM LAUGHING AT Pikario's "sex" ways i didn.t know Vivian was get the idea.
Peachrocks chapter 10 . 11/23/2005
Wow that was weird...

Anyway... The story was indeed very cool... and I'll list the several things I liked...

- Pikella's can of mace

- FranklyIdunno

- The audience being happy even though they threw a beer bottle

- Throwing the tattle log

- Ms. Rwatt spanking Pikario

- Jolene kicked Pikario in the balls and the piece of paper being porn

- Pikella eating the cake and spewing everywhere

- Strippers on the stage

- Putting TEC's pervertism to new levels, just what would it do with that condom :P.

- Love the names of the town's... Holycrapits6: Town and Freak-A-Leek city are my favourties

- The Excess Sex Express chapter was VERY funny.

- Doopliss transforming into Shigeru Miyamoto? I don't know where you came up with that idea but it worked really well.

- Flurrie using Proper English and Bobbery using English Accent

- Grodius' dress... I never thought of it that way but yes it's true

- Koopie Koo: It's finally night time

- "Quick get the Gothic CD's"

And finally - Pikella ended up shagging everybody! What!

Anyway I'll end up reading some more later... see you.
Ike chapter 3 . 10/28/2005
very funny. keep it up
l33t mastah chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
awesome ! i like the part when pikario commits arson in his own living room !
Clear Free-Flowing Liquid chapter 2 . 7/28/2005
For shame! I thought that you, of all people, would be able to see that Hooktail wasn't evil at all. Although you didn't actually say she was evil, you could've made it less obvious, since it isn't true. But anyways, so THIS is what's been keeping you from writing BOA. But I must admit, the Pikario stories are a side of you I've never seen, and I like them. Either way, good story so far. Hurry up and finish Pokestar Saga and put out 60 chapters of Better Off Alone before the end of the summer. This is the longest review I've ever written, and I like it. So I'm just gonna rant for a while. Flamecube sucks. Poverty in Africa sucks. Terrorism sucks. Your stories don't suck. Bush sucks. The US army doesn't suck. Canada rocks. Being Canadian rocks. Sweden rocks. Sleep rocks. Puberty sucks. Food is good. Vegetarianism is good. Writing hideously long reviews that aren't even about the story is bad, but fun. I'm gonna stop now. I give your story so far a 9/10.
LordLuffy07 of the Merry Go chapter 10 . 7/28/2005
In my eyes, this is the greatest Mario fic EVER!

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