Reviews for Never Quite Right
howtospotahippo chapter 2 . 3/23/2006
please put in a plot It's so boring without one!but It's interesting
Riahannon chapter 2 . 3/8/2005
interesting-i wanna see the plot can't wait
AbiSnocom chapter 2 . 2/12/2005
I'm a little confused but I liked the story and I would like you to continue with it. ; )
ainon chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
Rather dark, and quite intriguing. I like your take on Dawn's character and that peek into her future.
Michelle R chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
Thats kind of sad Its good but sad write more to it please this could go somewhere really good.