|Reviews for The Paladin Way to Fall|
| Weigraf chapter 5 . 10/20/2005
I really like this story, its well done.
My favorit secen is when Arngrim, Callah, and the rdm are figthing off Galanin. Its very clever what you did with the ninjitsu (is that right?).
Update soon, this is a really good story. I'm wondering where you are going with the air shipment.
| Iris Cal chapter 3 . 2/3/2005
That was SO awesome. The action in this story in incredibly fast-paced, and packed in tight. These two chapters not only live up to the promise of the first chapter, they far exceed it.
| Iris Cal chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
This is a wonderfully well-written piece. Just the first chapter itself is very promising. You do a particularly fine job with the dialogue; it flows smoothly, and not only are you very good at displaying the emotions of your characters, but with just the right seasoning of humor, too.
I eagerly await the next installment.
| Viddion chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
Yes, it is quite the soul stealer... ahh FFXI you taunt me so. Story is off to a good start. PALADINS UNITE