|Reviews for Punishment|
| jamie chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
i like it so far.
| Daylight dancer chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
Amazing first chapter! Update soon! _
| ArcherofDarkness and Callie chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
You're sixteen and writing in a different language! WOW! I can barely even speak another, except pig-latin!
Alice sounds like an outcast, not just a person who really isnt an ourcast but just called one for the sake of a story. I cant wait to see how this will tie in to the TP plotline!
| ExcursionGuy84 chapter 1 . 1/24/2005
Good Character you've got going with Alice.
Alway's good to read about a girl who's very athletic-and even inclined for solar surfing too!
| XXXXXXXXXXDeletedAccountXXXXXX chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
update update update update update !
already like it alot, so dude, hurry up and update!
or else I will do some horrible stuff to you! MWHUAHHAHAHAHAHHAAHHA
horrid greets Swift tales
| Little Hawk chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
This first Chapter is great and the way you written Alice makes this first chapter very excellent and I would like to thank you for putting it up because by the looks of it this story will be one of my favorites so please update soon.
| Janna Silver Hawkins chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
i like how this story is going so far!
lol, Alice reminds me of myself! I never really wanted to do a lot of "girl stuff" when I was younger :D
please update soon! :)