Reviews for Punishment
jamie chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
i like it so far.
Daylight dancer chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
Amazing first chapter! Update soon! _
ArcherofDarkness and Callie chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
You're sixteen and writing in a different language! WOW! I can barely even speak another, except pig-latin!

Alice sounds like an outcast, not just a person who really isnt an ourcast but just called one for the sake of a story. I cant wait to see how this will tie in to the TP plotline!
ExcursionGuy84 chapter 1 . 1/24/2005
Good Character you've got going with Alice.

Alway's good to read about a girl who's very athletic-and even inclined for solar surfing too!
XXXXXXXXXXDeletedAccountXXXXXX chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
update update update update update !


already like it alot, so dude, hurry up and update!

or else I will do some horrible stuff to you! MWHUAHHAHAHAHAHHAAHHA

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Little Hawk chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
This first Chapter is great and the way you written Alice makes this first chapter very excellent and I would like to thank you for putting it up because by the looks of it this story will be one of my favorites so please update soon.
Janna Silver Hawkins chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
i like how this story is going so far!

lol, Alice reminds me of myself! I never really wanted to do a lot of "girl stuff" when I was younger :D

please update soon! :)