Reviews for Do Not Ask For What You Cannot Have
Liveforthemoments chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
Excellent writing, very easy to read and extremely interesting. Well done
Xelena chapter 1 . 12/7/2006
it's sad to see gabriel being so cold. poor vlad. good short though
Nikoru Sanzo chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
You're a versatile writer and it's wonderful to read both your angsty as well as humor fics. D

Nice to see a very "human" Dracula and I liked how you expounded on his desire for power & Gabriel. Keep up the great work! D
None99 chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
So sad! A beautiful story, it didn't need to be longer though I hated to see it end. Reading this has inspired me so much! I wish now that I'd read it before writing blood wars, it's given me so much insight into their relationship.

As for critiquing, I can only say that your vocabulary level is wonderful; your word choices are evocative and evoke the maximum response with minimal verbiage. Your characters are believable and so very very sad. My only criticism is about what we all have problems with-a typo here or there.

Overall, a marvelous read-it lives up beautifully to your past works. You can write pathos-whoo boy!
anonymous chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
WOW! *sniff* that was beautiful! Is there going to be more? If so, please continue, your talented!
Runts Gal chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
Very nicely done. I do like a bit of angst in my stories.