oh, i loved this! its a shame that there isn't enough Luis fics. its nice to see something from his POV, and i wish he'd been in it for longer, and maybe had a little romance or back story or something. ah well, i thought this was great! aww, i'm so sad that was the last chapter! i was hoping it would keep going for ever! i loved that last line:

As the last breathe left his body, Luis wondered one thing, " I wonder if women have ballistics in heaven "?

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Wow that was so cool! Soo James Bondish with the whole jumping out of the plane thing; and Luis is so sweet to help Ada even when she tried to kill him. BEST. CHAP. EVER!

No why does Luis have to die! sobs Great story, you should do a sequal!

WHYD U KILL LUIS CAN THERE BE ONE WHEN HE ISENT KILLED!

good story i loved it. luis is a cuitie. please read my fic it needs ideas!

Great Story...!

I saw you put this story under the genres of action/adventure/romance...um...I'm guessing who would he get involved... Ada, perhaps?

Please update

Wow! Luis is my fave character as well...what that bastard Saddler did was just plain EVIL! ;_; I like this, keep up the good work!

Darn, i am working on a fanfic similar to this about Luis' life. Mine's more long term though, so i might still post it. Anyway, great job on the fanfic. I only had time to read chapter one, but it seems good so far. I like Luis' laid back attitude you included. It suits him well.

ok chap 7/10 the part with Ada was pretty cool at first I thought Ada would get away with the sample but I guess not the ballistics is pretty funny Luis is always using lines at the wrong time oh well that's his caracter until the next chap

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lol ballistics i love that line. im almost done with RE 4, i just have to beat saddler

Great Story,

BlackFox

I was wonder when someone was going to start writing a RE4 fic,I loved RE4 cant wait to see what you can come up with anyways anticipating the next chap

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